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Post by Versok June 15th 2017, 11:27 am





Azathoth




The Bio

Real Name: Azathoth  
Title: Devil of Chaos
Alignment: CE
Age: 104 years old
Gender: Can be both
Race: Alien demonic race
Hair: Can vary
Eyes: Bright red eyes
Height: Can vary
Weight: Can vary


The Looks




Azathoth real form

The Personality

Azathoth is a chaotic being, of a race of demons were all are vile by nature, Azathoth, however, he has only one objective, to make the world less peaceful and more chaotic, that is what makes his life complete, to see the world burn. However, he is not the usual devil, he doesn´t want evil to reign, but chaos, he despises order, and he will do whatever it takes to bring down both heros that want the world to be peaceful and villains that want to reign with an iron fist. On the other hand, he does care for the life of some people, the life of those who bring chaos, people that want the world to burn just like him, while some people are guardians of peace, he is the demonic angel that protects chaos.

He wants to bring chaos to the world is by corrupting it, corrupting their people, Azathoth isn´t stupid, like every good demon, he is manipulative, he tries to unleash the sinner everyone has inside, he has a modus operandi, he discovers which capital sin defines them and tries to exploit them, he will try to make those with anger kill those who get in their way, to make those with lust to live a life of excess, to make the gluttony ones eat until it becomes a real problem, those with greed will do whatever it takes to get what they want, those with pride will end alone, those with sloth will simply give up and those with envy will make the life of those they despise impossible, the humanity would show their real face once more.  
The Story

Azathoth was born in Shinell, the planet of the demons, a race of wicked beings that only wanted to spread their ways,  there was no family or friends, only loyalty to the matriarch,  the oldest demon of the race, the one who gave birth to the rest. The demons had to survive on their own since they were born, so only the strongest ones would survive, Azathoth was one of those survivors. Not only one of them, but the strongest one of that generation. Those that survived were sent to another planet to corrupt it, and Azathoth was ordered to corrupt the planet known as Earth, while the humans were chaotic by nature, their evolution made them hide their own nature and the ones known as superhumans tried their best to preserve it, Azathoth was sent because of the superhumans, because he was the one who could take care of them, because he was worthy enough to accept the challenge, to corrupt the almighty planet Earth.


The Priority

1. Agility 4
2. Endurance 2
3. Reaction 3
4. Strength 1


The Powers

Super Strength
Flight
Super Endurance
Super flight speed
Blood vomit:  Azathoth can vomit something that looks like blood, it is actually a powerful red acid that burns like hell...literally
Self healing: Azathoth is able to "harvest" the sould of their victims by using a powerful spell, depending of how clean the soul his, he will heal himself more of less, pure souls from pure beings can heal his body almost completely after a bad fight, a good soul harvest could be enough to even regrow limbs, while a soul from a criminal who has done unspeakable things will do almost nothing to him
Shapeshifting: The demon´s race is a race of shapeshifter, they can hide their true form so they can manipulate other beings, Azathoth can shapeshift into any human form he likes, with some disadvantages
Awaking the true oneself: Azathoth can awake the capital sinners inside a human, he can try to make those with wrath inside them outburst in rage, those with lust get...lustful, etc
The Weaknesses

Holy Water: Azathoth true weakness, it is his kryptonite, and he will always try to escape when he is near it, while he isn´t the Christian version of a demon, water blessed by a man who has been working all his life for the good in a divine way will work against him, but he has to be good in intention,  holy water made by a priest who is a great sinner won´t work on him
Self healing weakness: The self healing method has is flaws, while he can heal himself a lot, it won´t do almost nothing to him if the souls doesn´t belong to a human with good intentions.
Wings: Without his wings, he cannot fly, of course
Problem of will: Those strong willed won´t be affected by his  ability to exploit their emotions
Churchs: It is similar to the holy water, but instead of being his weakness, he can´t enter a church
Holy powers: He is vulnerable to power coming from holy, divine beings, since they are extreme opposites, a holy man or woman is one of the few who can best him on 1v1 combat
Weakness of shapeshifting: When Azathoth is shapeshifting into a human, he, of course, loses the ability to fly, his tail , his two extra arms and horns, which gives him less options in combat

The Items

None, for now
The Minions

None, for now
The Fluff

Azathoth usually refugees in a well hidden ice cave inside a mountain in Alaska.
He has no actual friends and few people know him at the moment, which are mainly criminals who he is trying to manipulate.
And there is already a small cult about him

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Post by Shadowoof June 16th 2017, 4:15 pm

Okay, there is a lot that needs to be done.

First, you need to have a actual bases on that strength, can he lift around 500 tons? Or just 50 tons? You need to state clearly how much he can lift. Also, how durable is he, can he take a good amount of super human strength, his own strength? Or just a tank shell.

How fast is his flight, mach 1? mach 5? 400mphs?

Should state the self healing is PM based on Player characters.

The awaken ones self is also Permission based with PC's.

okay, now you have 8 powers and five weaknesses, it's a 1:1 ratio, 1 power, 1 weakness. Talking about weaknesses.

You just state Holy water is something he avoids. Why does he avoid it? Does it burn him? make his skin soft and this no longer durable? Also, having it so only holy water made by specific people means you can work around the weakness. It's  holy water. It's a weakness people need to exploit. Let it be such.

The self healing weakness is bad because it's very situational, you can have it so every npc around you is good willed.

Again, why is he vulnerable to people with holy and divine power, does it make it so he is weaker? He takes more damage? Be specific.

Shape shifting weakness is bad because well. It's not a weakness, you become a human, you no longer have those limbs, and nothing states you can't just turn back to your true form instantly to remedy the problem.

And the wings weakness. What do you mean by he doesn't have his wings? Are they gone for some reason? Did he have them torn off? Also, that weaknesses isn't really a weakness, it's obvious, without legs we can not walk, get me?

Please have a description of how he fly's, i know it's with his wings but what wings?

Weaknesses that i stated need to be changed and some added. Powers need descriptions and general areas of limitations along with added Permission based wording.

Change all that and we'll have another look over. Also. Add some spacing between powers and weaknesses, don't have to but it makes things way easier to read. Thanks.

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