Loretta's Minions (Ready for review)

by **WhiteRaven03** June 5th 2015, 10:01 pm

Azazel, The Winged Dark:

Azazel
"Are you here for bussiness or pleasure?"

Basic Biography

Real Name: Unknown.
Renegade/Hero/Villain Name: Azazel.
Title: The Winged Dark. He is summoned by the title: Tenebrosi Alatum.
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral.
Age: Believed to be centuries old, but he looks like he's in his mid twenties..
Gender: Male.
Race: "Demon".
Hair: Dark Brown.
Eyes: Light Brown.
Height: 5 ft 10.
Weight: 142 lbs.
Blood type: Nobody knows.

The Looks

Either include pictures in

Appearance:

The Legacy

What We Know:

Azazel is a strange individual, as a demon who is strangely interested in humans, their culture, and especially music, more specifically, jazz. He owns a bar in a place easily accesed in every dimension, and it's a hotspot for information, trade and good music. He recieves all customers with open arms and no judgement to who they are, especially if they are open to give him materials, as he loves creating contraptions (more especifically, weapons) with them.

He agreed to a contract with Loretta after she found his bar, it consisted about her giving him as many materials as possible. He also upgraded Loretta's guns to have a greater fire rate and installed cristals that generate energy bullets (so she basically has infinite ammo supplies).

The Powers and Weaknesses

Powers

Power 1: Weapon Crafting: He can create weapons and other offensive tools for Loretta after the right materials are given to him and if he isn't summoned for a while.

Power 2: Dark Swordsmanship: He can use a dark-beam blade that fuels it's powers with shadows about 5ft around it, reaching maximum power when it starts releasing bladed black feathers with every swing.

Weakness(es)

Weakness 1: Faulty Crafting: Azazel is a good blacksmith, but he isn't perfect. Mistakes can happen and weapons recieve more cons than pros. Sometimes they can break soon after they have been created.

Weakness 2: Overconfidence: This probably doesn't require any explanation, but combined with Loretta's, it can prove to be very disastrous.

Weakness 3: Extreme Greed: His desire for power and wealth are his biggest weaknesses, and he could abandon Loretta for a bigger catch to fill his pockets with as much money he can. This is unlikely as Loretta provides with money and power by giving him materials to sell and by taking him to most battles to increase his power.

Weakness 4: Taste The Daylight: His powers are extremely decreased in broad daylight or when light is being directly aimed at him. He becomes exhausted when this happens and he also loses his blade.

Physical Priority
(You are to put these physical attributes in order from 1 to 4. 1 is the highest priority, 4 is the lowest.)
3.Agility
1.Endurance
2.Reaction
4.Strength

Lilith/Samael:

Lilith/Samael
"I'm not one to play savior, but I guess today I'll have to make an ecception"

Basic Biography

Real Name: Unknown.
Renegade/Hero/Villain Name: Lilith, or Samael.
Title: The Serpent. Summoning: Blandum Anguis.
Alignment: Chaotic Good.
Age: Unknown, but she looks 30.
Gender: Female.
Race: Demon.
Hair: Black.
Eyes: Purple.
Height: 5ft 2in.
Weight: 110 lbs.
Blood type: Unknown.

The Looks

Appearance:

The Legacy

What We Know:

Lilith is a known seductress in her dimension and in ours, but she is not alone, a snake by the name of Samael whispers in men's ears to seek out Lilith, and that's when she strikes, taking the lives of her victim while also pleasuring herself. She and Samael are very cunning and know their ways when it comes to fighting, as they are not at all defenseless.

Loretta struck a deal with her when she allowed to the condition that Lilith could be able to run rampant in the world. She also provides Loretta with miriads of outfits.

The Powers and Weaknesses

Powers

Power 1: Samael: The Snake can attack, constrict, trap and sometimes poison the target.

Power 2: Lilith: She uses a whip that grows stronger everytime she or Loretta get hit by any form of attack. It's max power is shown when it's as long as 25 ft.

Weakness(es)

Weakness 1: Samael's movements are incredibly predictable, as he moves slowly and sisses when near an opponent, this can make him unbelievable useless against enemies with enhanced senses.

Weakness 2: Samael is not the strongest asset to aid Lilith in battle, since his predictable demeanor and weak attacks work more as a distraction than as an offensive maneuver.

Weakness 3: Lilith's whip does self damage, also, it can be cut quite easily. When it reaches full power, the self-damage is increased and it way more fragile, even though it is more powerful.

Weakness 4: Lilith is also easily distracted by anything or anyone more intersting than Loretta, a fight or whatever is most important. Examples are: gorgeous men and women that attract her and pretty jewelry.

RP Mechanics

RP Mechanic(s): She can provide Loretta new outfits.

Physical Priority
(You are to put these physical attributes in order from 1 to 4. 1 is the highest priority, 4 is the lowest.)
1.Agility
4.Endurance
3.Reaction
2.Strength

Abbaddon, The Void:

Abbaddon
"The Void"

Basic Biography

Real Name: The Void.
Renegade/Hero/Villain Name: Abbaddon.
Title: The Void. Summoning: Infinita foramen sugentium.
Alignment: Neutral Evil.
Age: Probably billions and billions of years old.
Gender: None.
Race: Black Hole.
Hair: None.
Eyes: None.
Height: The size of a fucking Universe.
Weight: Unknown.
Blood type: No blood in a Black Hole.

The Looks

IT is a sentient, universe sized black hole, it just looks like a deep blackness up close. (But you would probably dead if you were up close).

The Legacy

What We Know (Not much):

Abbaddon, as it is called by Loretta, is a black hole so big and powerful that the amount of matter it gained, and the solar sistems it swallowed whole, it gained knowledge, because of reasons unknown (maybe at the end of Loretta's story we will learn how it gained sentience).

As in personality, it is not very important, as he is pretty much only interested in eating everything it can.

How it and Loretta created a deal was weird to say the least. Azazel told her the THING was looking for someone who could help quench it's hunger and thirst for food, and the winged dark just HAD to recommend her for the job. She just accepted out of sheer fear. She still does not know how in the fuck Abbaddon contacted Azazel.

The Powers and Weaknesses

(All characters can be as powerful as they want, as long as they are balanced with proper weaknesses.)
Powers

Power 1: It can be summoned for a short duration of time to attract or push away everything in a range of 20 meters. It can swallow near-death interdimensional beings (request required) and spit out materials for Azazel.

Weakness(es)

Weakness 1: It is quite unstable and might stop minutes before intended and it is hard to mantain for longer, doing so may exhaust her and make her pass out suddenly.

Weakness 2: Certain enemies (player-controlled characters) cannot be swallowed by Abbaddon only a few (very powerful boss NPCs when they are defeated) are able to be swallowed.

Weakness 3: It's hunger is infinite, and might try to eat everything in range if Loretta hadn't used it (and fed it) in a while. This causes it to become bigger and more aggresive, trying to pull everything towards it, even Loretta, to feed himself.

RP Mechanics

RP Mechanic(s): Provides materials for Loretta.

Items/Minions

Physical Priority
4.Agility
2.Endurance
3.Reaction
1.Strength

Archangel:

The Great Metraton:

Metatron
The Voice of God

Basic Biography

Real Name: Unknown.
Renegade/Hero/Villain Name: Metatron.
Title: The Voice of God/s. Beam Summon: Scit Infinite. Greatsword Summon: Lux pungendo humanitatis. Scythe Summon: Deus conscia.
Alignment: Lawful Order.
Age: Unknown, probably eternal.
Gender: Male/Female.
Race: Deus/God.
Hair: None.
Eyes: None.
Height: 50ft.
Weight: Unknown.
Blood type: Light.

The Looks

First Form:

Second/Final Form:

The Legacy

What We Know (Very Little):

Metatron is a very strange and hard to understand being, he is the thing that made Loretta's role in the world (protector of earth from otherworldy beings) and the one who advices her. She does not know why, or how he started contacting her, but what's important is that he did. He gave her a little iddy bitty piece of his power to her, and the only way to summon him completely is to create a proper vessel (which is a hard task) and have Loretta kill herself to give him a boost of power that can help him settle in.

The Powers and Weaknesses

(All characters can be as powerful as they want, as long as they are balanced with proper weaknesses.)
Powers

Power 1: Deus Infinite: His powers when he had inhabited a proper vessel, these range from creating meteorites to sun-powered light lasers. His powers are much more powerful the longer he stays in his vessel. He can also summon weakened version of his henchmen, the Illuminatia. (Powers as a final boss).

Power 2: Enhanced Light Manipulation: This is an incredibly powered up version of Archangel's abilities. (Beams to Lasers, Sword to Greatsword or Scythe).

Weakness(es)

Weakness 1: He cannot use most of his Deus abilities when he just settles in a new body, but he is still incredibly powerful. (Boss weakness) His weaker versions of the Illuminatia are very weak compared to their true forms.

Weakness 2: Summoning his beams and swords is double as exhausting as Abbaddon's ability, and can make her pass out if she uses them to quickly and without barely any concentration.

Weakness 3: He is unbelievably cold and calculating, so he plans everything beforehand, but when his tactics are not effective or don't work out, he is unable to think what to do quickly.

Weakness 4: He does not care for human casualties, only about the world, so when Loretta is tasked to protect a human, he will not care if it dies or not, and will reprimand Loretta for trying to protect a worthless human being.
RP Mechanics

RP Mechanic(s): He and the Illuminatia are the bosses of Loretta's story (him as the final, multi-phased boss).

Physical Priority
(You are to put these physical attributes in order from 1 to 4. 1 is the highest priority, 4 is the lowest.)
4.Agility
2.Endurance
3.Reaction
1.Strength

by **Forceaus** June 5th 2015, 10:26 pm

Minions require 2 weaknesses for every power they possess and you're going to need to give them each their own template. Also Metatron simply isn't going to be allowed the way you have it now.

by **WhiteRaven03** June 10th 2015, 9:38 pm

Like, each of them have a separate character sheet in this same topic? And I'll change Metatron's to something different (LORETTA'S PLOT SPOILERS: Even though he will only serve as an epic final boss for her story)

by **WhiteRaven03** June 13th 2015, 10:53 am

Done editing, check if it's okay.

by **Odien** June 13th 2015, 11:05 pm

Approved until stated otherwise.

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