Dante Devilaro

Real Name:Dante Devilaro
Super Hero/Villain/Renegade/etc Name:None
Title:None
Alignment:Renegade. Only cares about his mission
Age:23
Gender:Male
Race:Elf
Hair:Dark blonde
Eyes:Crimson
Height:6 ft
Weight:195

Personality:Serious,self concerning,loving deep inside

History:Dante was born into a wealthy family with only his sister for company.He was well educated in the history of his land and the languages of the world.On his eighteenth birthday he awoke in a pool of his own blood, frightened, he called for his father. The following day the commitee of wealthy peoples was called for a meeting in which Dantes fate was discussed. He was to be protector of the land and leader of the commitee. Dante fufilled his obligations no matter how overwhelming they became. At twenty his family fell from power, casting him from his postition and sending him to the mainlands. His sister however, remained on their homeland being sold through the slave market. Now Dante is determined to save his sister and the Devilaro name.

Powers:Transforms his blood into weapons (he is able to solidfy his blood through a rare genetic trait within elven kind)

Power Grid:
STR:3
SPD:4
END:4
INT:3
EP:5
FS:3

Character Description:His skin is a tanned white that is nearly impossible to duplicate.The mans dark blonde hair shaved on the sides and back,but growing long on the top his bangs hanging down to his crimson eyes which bore a deadly quality.He has a tall, husky build but no real muscle tone.

costume Description:No certain costume just wears whatever

Roleplay Sample:I look out at the expansive blue ocean knowing this was only the start of my walk of shame as the cuffs rattled on my wrists. What i knew even more is i would do anything to get my sister back, "I will save you", I whispered into the wind as it blew against the rags i now wore.

Pretty cool,though i think you should mention like his abilities other than the ones already stated.Like fighting and stuff

u know im new to this love

I know

do you rp in first person like that?

Hmmm, could you perhaps explain the powers for me in detail? I don't really understand how they work and how he has gotten them.
And about your history; In my opinion it's a bit short and also a bit unrealistic. I mean, it's impossible for a mere escape pod to reach Earth from some galaxy far far away in just 2 years. I doubt an escape pod is made to travel near the speed of light (or beyond, by means of Alcubierre drives (warp) or Krasnikov tubes (wormholes)). Next to that do I think it's kind of a shame that you did not use the whole alien thing to describe Areo's planet of Maelstrom (why is it even called like that?) and his culture. Plus, upon arrival on planet Earth, señor Sonata would not be able to speak any kind of human language at first, would he?

Lots of love and peace,

Soap.

I dont know anything about space or how long it would take pod to get to earth or any sort of alien language and i called the planet maelstrom because it just seemed like it needed a name

Okay. Well, that's fine. Not everybody is an astrophysicist. Neither am I.
Anyway, could you perhaps clarify what his powers actually do (how does he 'hack' into other peoples perception) and what the maximum range is? Just what the extend of Sonata's powers are, you know?
And could you perhaps explain how the escape pod ended up on Earth and not, say, Pluto or Titan or Javin IV? And perhaps you could write something about the culture of Maelstrom in the history, because now it's kinda weird. I mean, Areo's from a planet and a galaxy far far away, which apparently has a very violent and not caring culture (Marauders, Leavin people for dead in the streets, Spacecruisers that blow up due to a mechanical malfunction) which is undoubtingly completely alien to humans like you and me. That's what I think, though.
It would explain the superb fighting skill, though.