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Elizabeth Kale
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Re: Elizabeth Kale
by Mekasoundwave February 23rd 2010, 11:02 pm
Yay! People Agree with me! Let's all hug her!
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Re: Elizabeth Kale
by Jacklu February 23rd 2010, 11:08 pm
keil7777777 wrote:Dang, Apparently I forgot to hit the "Send" button earlier when I tried to post
Well, as I tried to say to you earlier (and failed >.>), welcome to the site! I'mma hafta thank Tom later for apparently recruiting a ton more people. I think I'm going to side with Mind on this one, 'Cult. She reminds of an evil Winry from FMA. ^_^
The character app is pretty solid, though I do have a few issues with your power grid. I dunno if you've been told yet or not, but you only get 22 points to start, and each option in the grid can only be raised to 6 for a fresh character. To hit #7, you have to earn experience. So you might need to edit your grid a little. Take a point out of INT and another from elsewhere, and you should be fine.
Okay. I was not actually aware of the limitation, which is why I originally didn't post any grid values at all. =P I'll fix it up right now.
Another point (more of a reccommendation, really) that I'd like to...uh...point out (?) is your current value for EP. Your character is a techie who, as you stated, "for the most part, has no powers". Yet you put a 6 in EP, which affects ONLY custom powers and the like. Granted, you might need a few points for that strange arm of yours (though it COULD be argued that it's more of an accessory than a power), the self-imposed limitations are MORE than enough to bring that value way down. Which would give you a lot more points for the other stats ^_^ Again, really just a suggestion. Do with it as you will.
Another thing I wasn't sure about. I figured her arm counted as a power, which is the reason I put points into Projection at all.
Other than that, welcome to the site. If you get that out of the way, an admin will be sure to accept the character! Hope to see you posting soon!
Thanks for the help!
EDIT: And fixed. The strength, it should be noted, comes almost entirely from her arm as well.
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Re: Elizabeth Kale
by Bash September 8th 2010, 11:41 pm
Allow me the anime freak tell you the similarity of terrifying shit here.
Terrifying, Indeed. I went out of my way for this
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Costume/Character Description/Image:(I combined costume and character description, as Kale doesn't really have a costume)
Terrifying, Indeed. I went out of my way for this
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The hate inside you breeds!
It's getting hard to breathe.
The walls around you fall.
Your legs are getting weak.
You drop down to your knees!
Your mind’s forsaken you!
It's getting hard to breathe.
The walls around you fall.
Your legs are getting weak.
You drop down to your knees!
Your mind’s forsaken you!
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