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Post by crystalman1304 October 5th 2015, 10:18 pm


Solomon
"I have the brains."


Basic Biography



Real Name: Darwin Hunter
Renegade/Hero/Villain Name: Solomon
Title: The Brains
Alignment: True Neutral
Age: 33
Gender: Male
Race: White
Hair: Dark Brown
Eyes: Hazel
Height: 5'9
Weight: 165
Blood type: O+

 
The Looks
   

Darwin looks to be young, and has somewhat a high-pitched voice. He is also seen mostly with a jacket, and also is see with a hoodie. He also looks to be growing more and more with his hair, and has a few freckles on his face . He also is seen to look white, and has hazel eyes. Darwin also seems to have dark brown hair.

If to meet me him in person, you could see his large muscles and his overall height and weight. With that, he seems to look strong and tall, but not super tough.


 
The Legacy
   


Personality: When you first meet him, he can be seen as rude, and mostly because he doesn't trust people entirely. He also seems to have a huge ego, which makes him hard to work with. Beside that, once he gets to know you, he can start to be nice. But, he still seems to be rude a lot though. When fighting, he can be very fierce.

Darwin is very intelligent, and can be very loyal. When he makes a promise for you, he carries that promise out. Although, when he expects you to do a promise, Darwin wants you to do it. He seems to be very emotional sometimes, and has outbursts once in a while. Darwin also seems to get paranoid, and is very scared easily.

History: Darwin was born back in 1982, to a middle class family. His family included his mother, which was a nurse, and his father, where he ran a business. Darwin also had a sister named Cierra. Darwin was only 2 when he started to form sentences and walked. His parents were surprised by this, but deep down they knew why. Darwin's family had a super power that made them very intelligent beyond human capabilities.

Knowing this, Darwin's parents, Peter and Nora started to make him answer math questions for the third grade at 5. He answered all of them correctly, and Darwin's parents realized that he had great potential. Soon or later, they told a middle school when Darwin was only in 3rd grade about him being intelligent. Finally, Darwin was accepted by a school, and went into middle school. He went daily, and he was excellent with his grades.

This came with a price though, as Darwin had outburst at school. They started slow, and was sent to bee into detention. Finally, he started to have more sudden outburst. It to the point where the principal called Darwin's parents. Darwin was sent home, and he was sent to the doctor. Finally, he had a reason for all these outburst. Deep into his brain, he had a system which may have caused these. Darwin was sent to go and get help. After failing, they put Darwin into a special class.

Darwin's behavior stop so suddenly. After ending middle school, he finally went to high school. Darwin started to change a bit towards his attitude. He started to be rude, and started to stay in his room a lot. His parents were more  worried, and finally, Darwin started to get into therapy. After going to therapy classes, Darwin finally stopped with all his behavior, and went back to normal. Darwin started to excel into high school, and soon or later, he was then sent to go to College.

Before finishing high school, Darwin was acting a bit strange. With that, people realized that he had super strength, and his intelligence. The FBI realized he could have potential, and they could use him for missions or battles. With that, he would be sent to be imprisoned under a secret base, and before going he looked at his parents with a small, and scared face. He would have to go through tough luck, and will have to work hard and be experimented on.

Darwin was experimented for 15 years, before he would go on a mission. After being experimented on, he was sent back into his large room that looked normal, and he was fed daily. Darwin knew that he would have his chance to escape. When Darwin was out and was being sent over, he finally escaped. He went through without hurting everybody, and disappeared. Darwin is currently trying to help people, and is fighting criminals. Darwin also doesn't care that he is been hunted, and also doesn't care if he lines up with the law or not.

 
The Powers and Weaknesses
   


Powers

Power 1: Beyond human intelligence- Darwin has a power that make him intelligent beyond human understanding. When not fighting, he could be calculating, and solving problems with his brain. Knowing this, he can help people and solve hard puzzles without ease. Although some problems he may find hard, he finds them out later.

Power 2: Super Strength- Although Darwin can be seen as weak, do not underestimate him. He can be strong as any body he can. He can fight through buildings, and can knock people out with a few punches to the face. He also can stop cars, although it doesn't make him super tough.

Power 3: Enhanced Sight- Darwin has the ability to have enhanced sight. With this he could accomplish rather fantastic feats such as seeing  in the dark. With advanced sight such as his own, Darwin is able to take note of even the slightest detail, which when paired with his intellect allows him to observe and take note of certain traps.  In addition to his enhanced sight, Darwin also has the ability to see through illusions, as well as see people whom would otherwise be considered "invisible". He also can use that to get him out of sticky situations

Weakness(es)

Weakness 1: Paranoid-Darwin has lots of fears and phobias that will make him scared, or he might even faint. Darwin sometimes can be scared very easily, and usually meaning that, he can't stop it. Darwin can also have anxiety attacks that make him crying, or he might even be taken to the hospital.


Weakness 2: Ocular Photosensitivity - While his eyes are a great asset to him, Darwin's eyes are also highly sensitive to light. Bright lights or sudden flashes are the bane of his existence as they cause intense pain and can even cause temporary blindness

b]Weakness 3:[/b] Auditory Hallucinations - While his eyes are of great asset to him and he is able to see through illusions and invisibility, he is actually quite prone to auditory reflexive reactions when illusions are able to alter ones perception of hearing.

Weakness 4: Caution - Darwin must be cautions when using his superhuman strength, in situations where he is forced to use it he is liable to cause damage to his body. Just because he is super strong doesn't make him super durable.

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RP Mechanic(s):

Items/Minions

Physical Priority
(You are to put these physical attributes in order from 1 to 4. 1 is the highest priority, 4 is the lowest.)
Agility 2
Endurance 3
Reaction 1
Strength 2


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Post by Zell October 5th 2015, 11:16 pm

Okay buddy, the app looks alright for the most part but I have a few things that need to be brought up before I can approve this.

  First off you have 4 powers and only 3 weaknesses... That being said Weaknesses 1 and 2 are pretty much the same thing. I could overlook that except for the fact Weakness 1 states that it's not likely to happen.

  Weakness 3 is basically Darwin turns into a super Sayian and killing everything in a 1 mile radius. That is actually not a weakness...that's sort of a power.

 
 Power 2 dictates that you can be as strong as anybody... Just keep in mind that there will be people stronger than you because of priorities and that this power is not an excuse to simply have unlimited strength.

  Power 4 says: Darwin has the ability to have enhanced sigh, which could make him see in the dark, or help him see traps. Although it may be not the greatest power, Darwin can find out anybody, and find out where anything really is. He also can use that to get him out of sticky situations.

   - This is alright until you say he can find out anybody and find out where anything really is. This is basically saying you can find anyone in the world at any time, see through any illusion and invisibility and you have the inhuman ability to detect any form of trap.  If you could just please reword or clarify...or add a weakness for those powers as well.

  Finally: Power 3 is cool, but you should really list what robots you have and their abilities under the Minions section. Each minion requires 2 weaknesses for every power, though the good news is that YOU don't need a weakness just for having them.


   So if you have any questions feel free to ask. This looks like a pretty cool concet and I wanna help you get what you'd like to do, but in order to make it happen we just gotta change a few things around first.   Feel free to PM me or ask for help and I'll jump on to help you as soon as I can!


  Welcome to SHRP and I look forward to working with you to make this app good to go!  

  ~Zelly

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Post by crystalman1304 October 6th 2015, 7:59 pm

Ok, well I have been on this site for a while, and decided to create a renegade. So being new to creating one, maybe you can give me a few suggestions and help, if you want to of course.

Thanks.
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Post by Humanity October 7th 2015, 2:56 am

Yeah, of course!   Here's what I would suggest personally.

 Here should be your powers....

Power 1: Beyond human intelligence- Darwin has a power that make him intelligent beyond human understanding. When not fighting, he could be calculating, and solving problems with his brain.

Power 2: Super Strength- Although Darwin can be seen as weak, do not underestimate him. He can fight through buildings, and can knock people out with a few punches to the face. He also can stop cars, although it doesn't make him super tough.

Power 3: Enhanced Sight-  Darwin has the ability to have enhanced sight. With this he could accomplish rather fantastic feats such as seeing  in the dark. With advanced sight such as his own, Dawrin is able to take note of even the slightest detail, which when paired with his intellect allows him to observe and take note of certain traps.  In addition to his enhanced sight, Dawrin also has the ability to see through illusions, as well as see people whom would otherwise be considered "invisible". (Enhanced sight, See through illusions, see "invisibility".) He also can use that to get him out of sticky situations.

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Weaknesses:

Weakness 1: Paranoid-Darwin has lots of fears and phobias that will make him scared, or he might even faint. Darwin sometimes can be scared very easily, and usually meaning that, he can't stop it. Darwin can also have anxiety attacks that make him crying, or he might even be taken to the hospital.

Weakness 2: Ocular Photosensitivity - While his eyes are a great asset to him, Darwin's eyes are also highly sensitive to light. Bright lights or sudden flashes are the bane of his existence as they cause intense pain and can even cause temporary blindness.

Weakness 3: Auditory Hallucinations - While his eyes are of great asset to him and he is able to see through illusions and invisibility, he is actually quite prone to auditory reflexive reactions when illusions are able to alter ones perception of hearing. (Basically flinches at loud noises)

Weakness 4: Caution - Darwin must be cautions when using his superhuman strength, in situations where he is forced to use it he is liable to cause damage to his body. Just because he is super strong doesn't make him super durable.



Then for Minions you'd have to tell me what you think you want for minions before we look at that tinker thing lol.  Hope this helps some.

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Post by crystalman1304 October 7th 2015, 4:24 pm

Well, I want my characters minions or robots to act as cameras, and aerial combat.

Also it did help so much, but wait, once I do my minions, is my character accepted?
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