Switch Accounts
Log in
Latest topics
Word Count
Shrink your Links!
Rating
Sexual Content 2: Sexual content is permitted. References and writing about genitalia and sex acts are permitted, but explicit detail is not. Fade to black, or use the dotdotdot rule. (Let's keep it PG-13.)
Violence 2: Graphic violence is permitted. Explicit description or in-game narration violence is allowed.
Despite these ratings, keep in mind that there is a limit, and you should not cross it just to garner attention. Also, resorting to curse words is also like adding senseless fluff to your posts.
License
Discord Server
Disclaimer
Superhero RPG does not own any content written or distributed by Marvel or DC Comics. All of the content referencing to Marvel or DC belongs to its rightful owners. Superhero RPG does not claim rights to any materials used such as Comic Book, Movie, or Video game character images. Superhero RPG does retain the rights to any and all posts made by the original authors that are a part of SuperheroRPG.
Copyright © 2008-2024 by Chellizard, Spirit Corgi, Atlas, and Pain. All rights reserved. No part of this website may be reproduced or transmitted in any form without the written permission of the author or the Site Owners.
Delete this Please
Page 1 of 1 • Share
Delete this Please
The guy had a point, to much of a rip off will be back with hopefully more original character
Last edited by Kid Max on November 22nd 2011, 1:13 pm; edited 3 times in total
Kid Max- Status :
Online Offline
Quote : "Insert Quote from Character Here" or etc.
Warnings :
Number of posts : 30
Registration date : 2011-09-26
Re: Delete this Please
Okay this is my third and final character. Here is the list of my guys just so you are tracking
Kid Max
Project War
Hallow (waiting on account approval)
Kid Max
Project War
Hallow (waiting on account approval)
Project War- Status :
Online Offline
Quote : "Insert Quote from Character Here" or etc.
Warnings :
Number of posts : 13
Registration date : 2011-10-28
Re: Delete this Please
Edited ready for approval
Kid Max- Status :
Online Offline
Quote : "Insert Quote from Character Here" or etc.
Warnings :
Number of posts : 30
Registration date : 2011-09-26
Re: Delete this Please
Combat Computer: Hallow has the power to help predict a foes next move and a possible out come of his reaction to it. His 'fight implants' include a 'combat computer' that allows him to run through all the math, such as angle of the attack, the force of the blow and the reaction of the body from being struck, almost instantly. He uses this information to predict the actions and or reactions of his foes, counteracting their moves and hoping to give him almost a step ahead of the opponent. However note that this is not 100% accurate and also an inactive opponent can throw off the system. (Opponents with high FS will be harder to guess then others.)
Tactical Senses: Hallow’s senses allow him to detect any physical modifications or powers (ie. Super strength, Super speed, Healing factor) in anyone he looks at, as well as how they work, so his implants can start developing ways to defeat them. Hallow then catalogs examples of powers in this combat computer for later use. He can detect the increased electrical activity in an opponent’s brain.
Pain Receptor Control: Hallow can turn his pain receptors on and off so he can keep fighting when the pain would stop a normal man, and has implants that numb him to most pain, capable to the point where he can undergo major surgery while awake and alert. The pain is not totally cut off though, nor does it help with any effects of injuries that caused the pain.
^See these?
The first one is a measure of your FS, nothing more than Fluff, any other INT/FS character can do this pretty easily
the second one is a power separate from the third, which gives 1 EP for each, making them bad powers
I know you are trying to make a Midnighter ripoff, since the powers and appearance are exactly the same which also conflicts the the rule of no making ripoff characters, which this is as obvious as Ferrum was ripping off of Magneto
Tactical Senses: Hallow’s senses allow him to detect any physical modifications or powers (ie. Super strength, Super speed, Healing factor) in anyone he looks at, as well as how they work, so his implants can start developing ways to defeat them. Hallow then catalogs examples of powers in this combat computer for later use. He can detect the increased electrical activity in an opponent’s brain.
Pain Receptor Control: Hallow can turn his pain receptors on and off so he can keep fighting when the pain would stop a normal man, and has implants that numb him to most pain, capable to the point where he can undergo major surgery while awake and alert. The pain is not totally cut off though, nor does it help with any effects of injuries that caused the pain.
^See these?
The first one is a measure of your FS, nothing more than Fluff, any other INT/FS character can do this pretty easily
the second one is a power separate from the third, which gives 1 EP for each, making them bad powers
I know you are trying to make a Midnighter ripoff, since the powers and appearance are exactly the same which also conflicts the the rule of no making ripoff characters, which this is as obvious as Ferrum was ripping off of Magneto
The Silence- Status :
Online Offline
Quote : "Insert Quote from Character Here" or etc.
Warnings :
Number of posts : 77
Registration date : 2010-07-20
Page 1 of 1
Permissions in this forum:
You cannot reply to topics in this forum
|
|
April 30th 2024, 8:00 pm by ghost
» A Demon In The City of Angels
April 29th 2024, 6:24 pm by Lazarus
» Denver's Demons
April 28th 2024, 3:02 am by Seamus McAndrews
» The Deal and The Hit
April 25th 2024, 3:20 am by Cynical_Aspie
» The Saint and the Sinner (Atlas)
April 21st 2024, 6:22 pm by Chellizard
» Randolph
April 16th 2024, 8:56 pm by inquisitor
» Ervin James
April 15th 2024, 9:53 pm by inquisitor
» Bloodfang
April 9th 2024, 4:14 pm by inquisitor
» Rajabu Baraki (NPC)
April 9th 2024, 4:12 pm by inquisitor
» Morgan D'fae
April 3rd 2024, 6:33 pm by SicilianDragon
» The Hell Hole that is Home
March 29th 2024, 2:54 pm by Demonhunter
» The birds of expedience
March 29th 2024, 2:10 pm by Demonhunter