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Coronel Liffy

Post by The Perfect Sandwich on April 22nd 2011, 4:02 pm


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Basic Biography



Real Name:  Coronel Liffy
Renegade/Hero/Villain Name:  Coronel
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Age: 25
Gender: Male
Race: Caucasian
Hair: White
Eyes: Red
Height: 5`5"
Weight: 150 lbs

 
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The Legacy
   


Personality:

He is quick to judge and assess information before jumping in blind. He has an attitude towards all meta humans and does not tend to work with them. He believes his own abilities is what he needs and will see it no other way until a force to great for him comes along. He is a well known person in every country not for being a hero, but a villain to stay clear of. No one knows his origins and hardly few can get through his will, but does not mean he cant be mind read.


History:

It goes to show that in life there are plenty of things to cherish and plenty of things to work towards. Having abilities is more of an influence of power that people struggle with from time to time that everyone can easily come over. With over given people do things they seek to make life easier. No matter what roads they have to cut through to get from point A to point B. But this is also not a very good thing.

Back in the mid evil time of year 450 there were very few meta humans who possessed abilities and no one knew how to teach them to control or to fight urges when they had the power to grasp what they wanted and no army could stop them from their wish. It was the same story for most. Coronel was born into a family of his mother and father, but was soon found into another home of a close family friend. His mother was killed in a raiding on his local village and father murdered in the heat of war to protect his kingdom. In both cases it was done by the hands of meta humans and one time was enough. He hated other meta humans with a passion and soon bottled up the hate until he could fight properly. He trained with the basic sword styles of the era and learned what he needed to quickly kill other meta humans.

As his troop of soldiers marched for the king into a near field he was armed ready to fight the next army to protect his own kingdom. Just like his family before him, he was also up against a meta human controlled army. Was it fate or was it his end. He would die like his father in this fight unless he stay true to what he honed. Through the swinging metal and clashing arrows; not once did anyone ever see a meta, or in their time a child of which craft. It was later when they returned home to see everything in flames as one of the young teens taking up arms killing off everyone's family including Coronel's own. He could not race back fast enough on horse and found he was too late to aid them. The anger he felt was the breaking point. In anger and sadness Coronel dropped to his knees crying and in rage, and the meta was aware of the army by then.

With amazing speed the meta shot towards the army to only start killing off more people, but was met with a powerful force that pinned her to the ground. Coronel had one hand out an a face full of rage as the meta laid pinned on the ground helpless to Coronel's own abilities. She struggled to get free but was never strong enough to break free. His power came to him like an instinct and he was ready to start the era his way.

He swung his hand out to shoulder high away from his body and the body of the meta human ripped to shreds as she let out one last wail of agony. Coronel was 25 at this point and would not age no more after this point. Maybe it was just his hatred for those with abilities that kept a drive to kill but soon it came down to power and what ever he wanted just like others. Except the fact he seemed much more powerful than the many people had seen.

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After being alive for so many years, he has calmed down to the point where ever meta human did not have to pay for being gifted. It did not mean he did not hate them though. His anger was hard to work with, but also he would acquire help only when he needed it himself. Could just be the fact of being alone for such a long time and humans were not the best of company if they just died in seconds with no fighting chance. He was villainous to the ed always seeking what he wanted in life, but doing so he valued the little things he loaned for(Except Metas).


 
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Powers

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Power 1:

Coronel has the ability to use telekinesis to the sharpest and pinpoint accuracy as possible and can lift things of extreme tremendous  weights. He uses it to juggle liquids and solids around. And he also uses it as its own wave of force to protect and attack as well as creating shapes or constructs and can condense and expand what ever he is in control of. The ability has shown no limits to what it can posses. Like a muscle the more it is used the more powerful it gets.

Power 2:

He has an acute power to self heal by using the telekinesis in his body to make his wounds seal back up. He does not need to worry about wounds whether it be a scratch or a punctured heart. He can even heal if he is blown to pieces or denigrated since his matter is apart of him and the power that keeps him alive stays with the matter of his vessel. It will just repair himself to the point where he is living once again.

Power 3:

He has another ability to detect threats in an area like the presence of meta humans, aliens or anything that is not human. Although he can use the same power to detect human life and can choose which of the ones he sees are the strongest to the weakest and can also tell if any of them are suffering from illness or wounds.

Power 4:

He also has the ability to lift himself off the ground and can use it like pseudo flight using his ability of telekinesis to move him about the air. In this flight he can only maneuver and fly as fast as he can on land. Now this is still a faster way of travel since their are no obstructions.

Weakness(es)

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Weakness 1:

With the telekinesis he can use it as free as he wants but when he is manipulating object he cant use them any better as people who are specialized in what they control like using water better that a water manipulator. And picking things up that require focus and strain will drain him of stamina. Also when lifting heavy objects and is put under pressure he cant evade quickly and if he does he will either drop the object or loose control while evading. Major weakness... Gasses and/or plasma since he does not have control over it.

Weakness 2:

He can use the ability at anytime but must have focus to do it. So in the heat of battle he would end up messing up and probably make a small problem bigger. Everything from a scratch to a deep puncture will all take time to seal up. He also has a harder time healing when he is deprived of stamina and might mess up the process of healing. Major weakness.... Someone who has the power to negate abilities or can keep hitting him and occupying his time.

Weakness 3:

Now even though this ability has a lot of ups to detecting people does not mean it is constant. He has to send out the force to detect people, but even though it is faint smarter people who already know what meta humans are will or might catch on to themselves being watched by an unknown force. He can use this ability anytime he wants since it don't use up his stamina, but it does not mean that no one can sneak up on him. He will only use this if he feels threatened, but if someone made themselves undetectable or did not show themselves as a threat he would not care to use this cheat of his. He also cant use this under pain or during fights and while using it if attacked he would not be able to use it in the entire topic. Major weakness.... Using the power to detect people with amazing strength to a crowded building will make him faint or give him a sick feeling an will show when in topic.

Weakness 4:

Though his pseudo flight is great he will not be able to maneuver like someone with an actual flight ability, being able to fly or having wings. He can't go through storms like hurricanes, thunderstorms and blizzards. And using up a lot of stamina will make him an easier target but does not mean he can fly just lower maneuverability. Major weakness.....Weather.

RP Mechanics

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RP Mechanic(s):

He has a simple wealth increase thanks to the many jobs and uses such cash to lay back. Every villain needs a break.

Physical Priority
(You are to put these physical attributes in order from 1 to 4. 1 is the highest priority, 4 is the lowest.)
Endurance: 1
Reaction: 2
Agility: 3
Strength: 4


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Re: Coronel Liffy

Post by Victor Vincent on April 22nd 2011, 5:06 pm

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His dad the one who taught himeverything he knows now was not very strong, no in fact the martial arts he has learned over the years was to use someones strength and wait aginst them. He has the fighting skill to over turn any 10 ton object that is headed at him at a high or max speed. He uses the momentum of the to flip there selves over and if it is going to slow it he use his other things he learned to dodge strait up attacks although he has gotten beat plenty of time it is also the other way around he has one aswell.

Your father may have been able to do things like this, but with only 4 fighting skills you cannot. You're a great fighter, but this is a bit much for someone at your level. I know you didn't say you could do it, but I'm still just pointing it out.

Mr. BigMac wrote:Power Grid: (You have 22 points to spend on your Power Grid unless you can fly, in which case you have 20. Each stat can start at 6, not 7. 7 must be earned.)
STR: 2
SPD: 3
END: 4
INT:3
EP: 6
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You're going to have to explain how you achieved super human endurance. In your history you explained how you got your EP powers, so all you'd have to do is also add that you got super human END from your mother. Spidey

Mr. BigMac wrote:Powers: ...He is able to make one alot stronger thats swirls up to 150 to 250 miles an hour around him and is his strongest attack. It does not affect him at all but it is able to rip apart steel beams and push down a wide spread of buildings around him or he is able to make it more condensed and fire it in a line that easily goes right through steel and iron.

I think that the speed on this attack needs to be toned down, or given a drawback, such as a casting time this way it is more far and fit for a lvl 6 EP attack. Also, the part about ripping steel beams to push down a wide spread building also needs to be toned down. First off, I don't understand how it doesn't effect you if you'd be collapsing a building on-top yourself. And second, it's not fair to be able to collapse buildings like it's nothing so you should do the same thing I told you before. Either give it a casting time, some other kind of drawback, or may it strain the crap out of your body.

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Post by Victor Vincent on April 22nd 2011, 7:21 pm

You only made edits to the first part of my post, you still haven't edited your powers, or answered my other question.

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Post by The Perfect Sandwich on April 23rd 2011, 5:32 pm

First off i edited it all right second he dosent collapse the building on him. He makes the ball of disruppted space and it creates a wind that tears a building apart like i said and also the parts of the building are fling around me.

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Post by Victor Vincent on April 23rd 2011, 6:13 pm

I understand how your power works, but that doesn't make it fair. A level 6 EP user cannot, and should not be able to rip up and swing buildings around him. You're going to have to tone down your powers limitations a bit like I said in my first post.

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Post by devistation on April 23rd 2011, 7:52 pm

even though lvl 7 can destroy a town levle 6 should be able to take out a few buildings and have debris flying over head i mean it is only fair to the 6 ep but i will erase the building part if you like.

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Post by Victor Vincent on April 23rd 2011, 9:30 pm

Level 7 EP cannot do that, your getting that off of the old stat sheet equivalents. We've toned down EP and Speed so they aren't as over powered as they used to be. So you're going to have to weaken your powers some. The damage you can do to high Endurance characters is unchanged, but your ability to destroy building like it's nothing has to be changed.

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Post by Victor Vincent on April 24th 2011, 11:45 am

Alright better, I think this application is ready to be approved, just as long as you understand that even though your attack can spin at 150 to 250 MPH, it still only does at much damage as any other lvl 6 EP attack. The only thing left is your powergrid, what color would you like?

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Post by The Perfect Sandwich on April 24th 2011, 3:20 pm

charcoal black and blood red and if you can grey with this as well plz
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Post by Victor Vincent on April 24th 2011, 9:58 pm

Powergrid added, approved and moved.

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Post by The Black Arrow on April 26th 2011, 10:40 am

Re-Approved.

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Post by Arcana on May 5th 2012, 3:19 pm

I'm sorry but due to a problem with the app it has been unapproved. Could you please explain how you are immortal? If not remove that part from the app.
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Post by Arcana on May 5th 2012, 6:56 pm

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Post by Chellizard on September 2nd 2012, 12:28 pm

un approved to update powergrid

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