Jubinhof's Reign

by **Jubinhof** July 15th 2015, 11:47 pm

Neal Caffery
"NO MATTER HOW MANY TIMES YOU SAVE THE WORLD, IT ALWAYS MANAGES TO GET BACK IN JEOPARDY AGAIN."

Basic Biography

Real Name:Neal Caffery
Renegade/Hero/Villain Name:Jubinhof
Title:Protector Of The Realm
Alignment: Lawful Good
Age: 26
Gender: Male
Race: Farin
Hair: Black Slicked Back
Eyes: Blue
Height: 6'2
Weight: 185
Blood type: AB-

The Looks

The "Costume"

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Neal's Appearence

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Neal's Clothing Style

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The Legacy

Personality: Neal is a billionaire playboy by day and a mighty hero by night. He is a playful and headstrong hero that strives to keep justice and order, no matter the cost. His humour also proceeds him, sometimes breaking through his 'character' while crime fighting. Which means, he usually acts while posing as a superhero and tries to act tough and strong even in the presence of danger to help strengthen his allies morale to ensure his own panicking doesn't provoke theirs and allows himself to show example of having the need of courage.

History: "Neal" not actually born from Earth, rather a alien race that resembles a human in it's own way. A planet from a distant solar system is his birth place, said to be called "Farina". Due to the destruction of the greatly safisticated and advanced civilization by the hands of Haron, a space conquerer, "Neal" was then sent out in "escape" pod contraptions like several other infants in different directions of the galaxy to try and perserve the alien race. After some time, traveling at near lightspeed and automatic space navigation to Earth. The pod finally arrived to Earth and began it's desent into the atmosphere with advanced propulsion that deaccelarated the pod with the help of Earth's atmosphere, he landed just on the outskirts of New York city on the front lawn of a middle aged african american couple and their son Jason. After the landing happened, they kept the landing all hush hush and the surrounding hood gang kept it on the down low and accepted young Neal into the Caffery family and eventually legally adopted him and gave him the name of Neal Caffery. After years of growing up, it was clear Neal wasn't like other people at all, his brain was faster and smarter, he was stronger and faster and much later he learned he was capable of telekensis and was pretty much indestructable as well as flying capablilities, he was pretty much a superhuman at a drastic scale, even knowing Neal was different and potientally dangerous, they still loved him and raised him in their home with little income. Neal began to understand the streets from the help of the gangs that lived in his area at the time, at the age of 15. By then he was already able to pretend to be normal and did it quite well. Due to his super intelligence and wisdom, he was able to finish high school with perfect grades, he was then luckily granted a scholarship and went on to attend Harvard university and left with a degree for technology and easily started his own company that created nano computers and technology that was way more advanced than the world has ever seen so far. After the success of his company and plenty of money at that point, the company grew and he soon hired staff and was able to purchase a large skyscraper for his company in New York by the time he was 23, soon after he began the development of nanotechnology and began working on different projects with the nonotechnonlogy, which could be used to inject into a person to cure cancer and diseases, but was too expensive to reproduce which made anyone that sick have to pay a large sum of money to receive the nanites. After a few years of development of the medical uses of the nanotechnology, he began to weaponize it for personal use, such as, a nano suit that provided a way to have a secret identity and protection, along with a few abilities of the suit. By this time he was now 26 and began his crusade of fighting crime and took on the name of Jubinhof and today, has two whole years of experience and already earned his own title.

The Powers and Weaknesses

(All characters can be as powerful as they want, as long as they are balanced with proper weaknesses.)
Powers

Power 1: Super Strength/Speed I.e Mach 3 Speed and super jump, (Think Superman when it comes to speed and strength post-crisis, he's fast because of his strength and strong because well, he's like Superman. Neal can run fast and react in what seems to be slowmotion while going fast due to his super brain being able to process things fast, making him similar to the Flash, but not nearly as fast. Of course I am referencing different superheroes to help picture this characters abilities)

Power 2: Telekinesis, Neal has the ability to lift and throw objects and move them around freely with his mind. The only thing this is limited to is the size of the object and if he can visually see it, the bigger the object is, the harder it is to move or lift or throw, or do whatever he pleases. Secondly, he isn't able to use this power unless he is able to see his target/b]

Power 3: His Super Brain allows him to be beyond a genius and can usually predict a opponents next move, of course, occasionally he may be wrong, additionally, to his intellect, his brain is able to process events and perceive them in a much faster rate than any normal being, as well as solve problems)

Power 4: Super human durability (Think superman durability, he can take damage from anyone else with super strength and is literally a walking super tank, can survive explosions and heavy amounts of damage from anything, but over time starts to get weaker, demonstration >
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[b]Minor Power 5: In fared vision, i.e can see heat signatures naturally

Weakness(es)

Weakness 1: His telekinesis can be obstructed by blinding him someway by blocking his vision

Weakness 2: Neal can be distracted or manipulated if innocent lives are in danger or peril restricting his actions

Weakness 3: When Farina was attacked, it was exposed to a special type of gas called The Plague, which is virtually undetectable visually and provides only a faint scent. Which in turn ended up slowly killing any Farin very easily. If this extremely rare gas that is only known to a very small and tiny few group of individuals, humans are clueless to it's true existence, but a sample resides in a controlled remote location with plenty of security for testing purposes in attempt to create immunity from it by Neal. The gases effects are deadly on a regular human, but incapacitates any Farin and will, over time kill them with prolonged exposure, Neal nicknamed it, "The Plague". Which, when his data server was hacked, information on The Plague has been released publicly and anyone with a high enough intellect and resources can reproduce this gas artificially over time, the artificial version throttles Neal's power back and make him weaker significantly if inhaled.

Weakness 4: Allergic to animal hair, can mess him up pretty badly if exposed.

Weakness 5: Due to his suit being made of some metal composites, he can be vulnerable to anyone that manipulates metal

Weakness 6: His genetic nature makes him vulnerable to magic based abilities, doesn't mean like fire or electricity. Straight up magic.

[b]Weakness 7: Due to a imperfection in his genetics when struck with large amounts of electricity, he is able to perceive through the vibrations of space and catch random glimpses of alternate timelines, catching him off guard and making him lose focus occasionally, the problem with this is that he can't make out any of it.

RP Mechanics

RP Mechanic(s):
Can breath in space
Will mostly be in New York
Billionaire Playboy, so will see alot of cockyness
Can possibly be seen in space combat, if there's a place for it[/b]

Items/Minions

Nanosuit: Capable of basic protection from bullets and knives, even though isn't needed to. It also comes with a built in gas mask in the helm of the suit and due to the high tech and tight fit, it is highly capable of anyone with high dexterity and flexibility.

Physical Priority
(You are to put these physical attributes in order from 1 to 4. 1 is the highest priority, 4 is the lowest.)
Agility 4
Endurance 2
Reaction 3
Strength 1

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by **Atlas** July 16th 2015, 12:07 am

Alright, i'm Pat and i'll be looking over your app today.

First off just so you're aware, your character cannot have a limitless amount of strength. It may not be your intention, but I want to avoid that problem before it starts. Perceiving things by the attosecond might not be allowed considering the sheer overpowered nature of that, I don't know though I know the starting max speed for super speed is mach 3. You can increase that with advancements but it starts with that.

Secondly you need more weaknesses than you have listed. You have nine powers listed and need an equal number of weaknesses. The third one is too rare to be a legit weakness, and two and four also seem too similar to be legit.

Not a requirement, but I would imagine they would need superhuman durability to properly use the strength and speed.

Aside from that everything else looks fine. Once you've finished editing, I will look over this again.

by **Atlas** July 16th 2015, 1:12 am

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