Retaliate

Real Name: Jason Rath
Super Hero/Villain/Renegade/etc Name: Retaliate
Title: The Reinforced Soldier, The Self-Defense Warrior
Alignment: Good
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Race: White
Hair: Black
Eyes: Black
Height: 5'11
Weight: 150lb

Costume Description/Image: His exoskeleton covered his whole body and is his costume. Usually spider-man like.

Personality: Quiet, Patience, and Funny

History: Jason was born in a suburban neighborhood in Seattle, Washington with a caring family. He's in the 11th grade and make decent grades at school. He has a girlfriend named Lilian and a handful of friends. He also has a job in Starbuck with Lilian.

Jason had a nice life, but everything changed when he bagan starting to developed his sixth sense. The sixth sense cause large amount of anxiety from anything that is considered a threat in his vicinity, on the day after manifestation he thought that it was just stress from school, and later attended a football game. Football is a very aggressive game with tackling, where tackling is still considered as a threat, and cause Jason's danger sense to go overdrive and becam increasingly paranoid, at the game towards everybody, including his girlfriend. which eventually cause her to leave him and pushed all of his friends and caused him to go into a depression after the game. Four month have passed the incident and was still paranoid, try to find a drug that would help with the anxiety, while at a grocery store he accidentally ran into his Lilian and avoided each other. Later, the store have been threaten by a pair of gunmen. Due to his Danger Intuition it cause him lash out, similar to cornering a wild dog, and took out one of them with the help of his danger sense. After that, he sensed the other one that he had taken a hostage and demanded Jason to step forward. Jason, did so and the gunmen take out his gun and aimed it at Jason. He proceed to tell Jason that his life will end because of this. Jason replied by stating that what the point of life if you can't share it. The gunman pressed his gun on Jason's forehead and commented that, that was a nice final words and pulled the trigger. This triggered his exoskeleton to form all over his body and richochet the bullet back into the gunman's gun and caused it to explode. The gunman hold his hand in pain and Jason took the opportunity and knocked him out. As he rejoiced when the anxiety stopped just for a moment, but while oblivious that Lilian saw the whole thing, Jason realized that the exoskeleton was genetic and was permanently activated. He panicked rushed home to find a way to deactivate it.

The exoskeleton was activated for two months, but with the help from Lilian they managed to make an excused that let Jason stayed in his room to find a way to deactivate the armor, but not only that, he learn that the anxiety was a sixth sense when he first deactivated the armor and fell asleep on his bed, while not noticing a brown recluse slowly creeping up him and was about to jump, when his anxiety return full throttle when the spider jump, he got out of bed and killed it. While wondering how he managed to dodged it, he decided to see if he gained a sixth sense by taking three of his mom's kitchen knife, when throw them in the air and attempt to juggle them, his danger sense activates at just the right time to grabbed the handles to avoid being cut. He finally managed to got over his paranoia after a month after turning off his armor, he got back with Lilian and his friends. Lilian persuaded him to become a superhero and save people like in the store. His girlfriend suggested that his name should be 'Retaliate', because he has to sense danger to be able to fight back, so he agree to it because it's a cool name.

Powers:
Danger Intuition-The ability to sense any unwanted or hectic event.
Empathic Exoskeleton-When in the presence of danger a red carapace will form all over his body and give him super strength and durability with other powers that came with the exoskeleton similar to an insect, the armor also serves as his custome, he can also psionically augment his armor, like forming small spikes, enlarge his fists, change the apperance of the armor, etc.
Limited Acrobatics-Due to the Danger Intuition, it also increased Jason's agility and dexterity, giving him limited acrobatic skills.
Weakness-If someone has taken the form of someone close to him, than his danger intuition won't detect them. His armor can only be activated when in danger.
Power Grid:
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Character Image/Description: Short black messy hair, wears long jeans, a black T-shirt with symbols on them, wears red sneakers, and his favorite green jacket.

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Here ya go

:thumbs up: Awesome thanks!

As far as your powers go, seeing into the future will probably not be allowed. But I'll leave that up to a moderator. It would not only cost more than 2 EP, but would make Reflexes and speed a useless skill, as you can dodge every single attack with precognition.

The rest of his abilities look fine, I'm assuming the 2 EP would be for changing his fists into spikes and enlarging them. But one question regarding this:

Weakness-If someone has taken the form of someone close to him, than his danger intuition won't detect them. His armor can only be activated when in danger.

I don't see anywhere on your ability list that you can "Take the form of someone close to you". In what way can you do that? Just change your appearances, or do you copy something else?

I forgot about that, let me re-edit.
If this was real life, the seeing into the future can help you dodge but its useless if your not fast enough to dodge, which means that precognition can only give you a head start.
The weakness was meant for anyone that can shapeshift, my character cannot shapeshift.
And also yes the 2 ep will be for the spikes, enlargement, etc.

Okay, I took out the part about seeing into the future, but can I still keep the sixth sense? When he used his sixth sense, he will have anxiety to give himself a heads-up.

6th sense being a "Danger Sense" Similar to Spidey senses? I'd see no issue with that.

Sweet! Thanks!

All ya need now is a Mod to approve.

If you got the time, maybe expand your history a bit. You randomly got paranoid, and then got over it pretty quickly. Perhaps there's a trigger for the paranoia or some sort of history to that. Just sounded like something that could have been left out entirely since you never expanded on that.

Just my two cents, not a requirement.

Sul

I except your two cents.
And now I play the waiting game with the Mods.

Someone approve dis

The powers are fine, but the grid is a little off. You have
STR: 5
SPD: 5
END: 6
INT:2
EP: 2
FS: 2

It should look a little more like this
STR: 5
SPD: 4
END: 4
INT:2
EP: 4
FS: 3


Two points for the carapace and two points for enlarging things. So, now when your carapace is triggered your endurance goes up to 6 with the spikes and things and you can use your EP to enlarge them with the other two points.

Other than that it's fine.

So final Statsheet would look like this:

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Intel: 2 pts
Str: 5 pts
Spd: 5 pts
End: 4 (When armor activated, 6)
EP1: 2 pts to activate carapace armor (Put solely into Dur)
EP2: 2 pts Minor shape-shifting. (Spiked and enlarged fists)
FS: 2 pts

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That's what I said.

Hmm, this seems very reasonable.
Also, hey Sulfury, did you say that someone approved this, or are you telling someone to approve this?