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Post by Van Helcraft March 25th 2011, 5:26 pm

Real Name: Schneider van Scarver
Super Hero/Villain/Renegade/etc Name: The Black Tarot
Title: Schnidy
Alignment: villian
Age: 253 looks 25
Gender: male
Race: white
Hair: jet black
Eyes: red
Height: 7'
Weight: 200 lbs

Costume Description/Image: Buisiness suits and dress shirts in bright colors. Dark dress pants and shoes, and a pair of designer shades.Mostly wears his favorite pink dress shirt, with solidblack dress pants and shoes with hi phone strap hanging out of his pocket.often wears his shirt unbuttoned enough to show the rune tatooed on his chest.(rune transalates to dark wave.)

Personality:Completely warped from child hood abuse. A Sociopath that cant feel anger, sadness, or remorse. finds grosteque things fascinating and tends to take time doing such things. Omnisexual. Tends to do things that benefit him even selling out otherr villians.

History: Abused as a child he tossed away emotions that got him hurt worse. Had an easy time learning due to photographic memory.he found a grimiore, a book of dark magic and bought it from a travelling gypsie. He learned latin so he could transalte it and use it. The book contained powerful spells and a way to enchant tarot cards.He used the Dead Man tarot card to make his parents murder look like an animal attack. He used the tarot cards at will and became rich and successfull. Using the power of the Reaper card he has kept him self alive and young for hundreds of years.Using other cards he took over buisiness and firms all over the world. The Presindent of Black Magic Inc., And a stock holder in almost every other company.steals when he feels like it even though his bank accounts are inexhaustible.

Powers:
doesn't need to keep to keep his grimiore with him to cast his spells just needs the spell memorized and the Rune nearby.
uses Summoning Tarots or dark energy blasts.
2 E.P. Point Healer: has to actively focus on healing.small wounds in about minutes, medium wounds heal in 20 minutes large wounds and broken bones in hours, and fatal wounds in a day.
4 E.P. Points dark blasts: explains itself.
can greatly increase the force of his blasts by sacrificing parts of his body.

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Character Image/Description: death pale skin and blood red eyes. slicked back jet black hair and an incredibly lanky frame. Shirt unbuttoned to reveal a large black tattoo. Clothes hanging off his thin body.

Roleplay Sample: Stretching his long tire arms from typing a another horror novel,His new favorite pass time. He gets up for some coffee, he walks over to his highly polished black marble fridge and pulled out an ice mocha latte. Sitting back down he tried to think of something new to do. He had pretty much done evrything in his long life so it was a struggle to find something new. He flipped on his 30ft. plasma tv wondering why he bought the small one,and put on the news. It was going on about a new ultra secure bank that they believed no one could break into. perfect,he thought happily."I"ll gladly prove them wrong." He said aloud.


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Post by Paine March 25th 2011, 7:35 pm

The ONLY power I have a problem with is the Reaper one. If he has 0 intelligence, that makes him at dumb brute level of thinking. Your reaper form will need at least 1 intelligence to actually preform logical attacks.

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Post by Paine March 25th 2011, 7:42 pm

So, you have to promise that whenever you're using one of your powers, you don't God Mod out of the power or whatever and switch to your healer just to heal. I'm going to put a post cap on this. You'll wait three posting turns to change into a different card whenever you're playing this character. And I mean physical, real time posts. So if you take more damage during the posts, then you'll be shit out of luck.

Also, whenever you're going to change from whatever summon it is to the healer summon, it will take two posts to complete the change/healing process completely. Despite "healing instantly" and along with your level of skill, you can pull it off.

Any objections?

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Post by Van Helcraft March 25th 2011, 7:43 pm

absolutely i play fair.

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Post by Chellizard March 25th 2011, 8:04 pm

Very well! This is good news..

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Post by Wilbert Jackson March 25th 2011, 8:23 pm

Since you don't have a picture, I'm going to need a very good description of your appearance, right now it's difficult to picture you. You also have 23 points on your grid, as a non-flier you start out with 22.

Are these transformations or NPC's? Shadow, Hanged Man, and Reaper?
perfectpredator wrote:Shadow:can't be damaged by conventional means has to be hit with direct sunlight.Takes the form of their worst nightmare and tries to drive them insane. Str:0 Spd:6 End:0 Int:6 Ep:0 Fs:0
This sounds odd and too powerful, I'm going to say no.

perfectpredator wrote:Hanged Man:Jester like creature with a nuece must be burned to kill. Str:4 Spd:6 End:4 Int:6 Ep:0 Fs:2
If this is a transformation, FS cannot be changed across forms, and if you have multiple forms each of them must have at least 2 EP.


perfectpredator wrote:Reaper:Uses it to extend his life and fight.doesn't instant kill because he likes to give hope to his enemies.Str:6 Spd:4 End:6 Int:0 Ep:2 Fs:4
Like I said, FS can't be changed across transformations, and these all require much more detail.

You also have too many powers.

perfectpredator wrote:Dead Man 100 or 1: Regular zombies headshot to kill. 100 zombie summoning has 2 in everything but Ep and Int. 1 zombie summoning has Str:6 Spd:4
Summoning would be an entire power on it's own, I suggest scrapping this.

perfectpredator wrote:Random Summoning Tarot or dark energy blasts,And creating weapons out of blood and bone.
You're gonna have to explain this a little better. Typically a power only allows control over one major thing, but this states you can conjure dark energy blasts and create weapons of blood and bone; sounds like two different powers to me. I suggest picking one or the other.

perfectpredator wrote:Healer: heals any wounds instantly.
You'll have to go into detail on how this power works, and unless this was your major power, healing instantly isn't gonna happen. If you decide to have dark energy blasts and you still want this, you'll have to split your EP. More than likely split like this, 4 to dark blasts, 2 to healing.

perfectpredator wrote:Pupeteer: uses to control bank clerks to steal money unnoticed.
This is another minor power, but I have no idea what you mean by it. Is it mind control? This is another power I suggest scrapping.

In your history you never explain why you have super human attributes, (4 SPD), so either that must be lowered or you need a reason for that to be so. Also, where did you find this 'book of dark'? Can you only use your abilities/spells when this book is in your possession?

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Post by Van Helcraft March 25th 2011, 8:43 pm

my mistake with the additional point. And no they are not transformations they are summonings and i dont see a point in having to split my EP when I can only use one ability at a time. though i will scrap the shadow.
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Post by The Black Knight March 25th 2011, 9:55 pm

Well, with the way you've set yourself up, your 'dark blasts' will be ineffective against most characters. With 1 EP into a healing power, it will be much weaker than you've described. I don't think you should have the summons, I think they're pretty overpowered. I suggest you set your EP up like this, 4 to 'Dark Power' and 2 to 'Healing'. Though about the healing, is it a passive healing for you? Or is it the ability to heal through your hands? Explain how you use the power.

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Post by Van Helcraft March 25th 2011, 10:24 pm

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Post by Pain March 31st 2011, 9:36 pm

Approved. Just need to know what color you'd like for your grid.
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Post by Van Helcraft March 31st 2011, 9:39 pm

black if possible

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