Destrock

Real Name: Destrock Vogberg
Super Hero/Villain/Renegade/etc Name: Destrock
Title: green kill, allianator
Alignment: largely hero, with a bit of badass.
Age: 23
Gender: male
Race: Feston
Hair: black
Eyes: grey
Height: 8,0
Weight: 290 LBS

Costume Description/Image: Tall, muscular green figure. skin colour is this. He is quite muscular, but not overly ripped. He wears a tight black tank top, and tight black leather pants. he has a belt witch carries his guns and sword

Personality: Bad ass jerk. He is a hero in general, and has mid sized temper. If you piss him off, he will hurt you. He is very brave, to the point of stupidity. He is tough, badass a bit of an asshole, sarcastic and sometimes insensitive.

History: : Destrock grew up in a bad part of Hasbolick, the capital of Festo. He grew up mean and tough, raised by a gang. After his gang was killed in a fight at 13, Destrock took off into the jungles of Festo, and returned 3 years later with a mystical sword. He started a gang with him as the leader. He sent one of his best friends and members of his gang on a mission to earth. When he didn't come back within 2 months, Destrock went looking for him. He found his friend in (more info later) bu he was killed by (more info later)

Powers: Super strength. His is not so strong that he can lift buildings, but he can punch a normal person across a street, through a restaurant wall. He is very agile, he can do athletic things to keep himself from falling as an example. He has great concentration as well. He is quite quick, but hes not flash. He has a sword of elements called the Assablo Sword of Elements. It can control fire, water, ice, grass, and rock.


Fire: Blast of Fire, like water coming from afire hydrant that has had its top knocked off
Water: Same as above
Ice: He can freeze anything with in 20 meters, but anyone with a strength of 2 or above should be able to break it.
Stone: This he can only manipulate this. (ie: making minor earthquakes, cracks in the gound)
Grass: He trap people in vines ( Strength with 2 or more should be able to break), manipulate tress to make them get out of his way.


PowerGrid:
Str: 4
Int:3
Speed: 2
Endurance:3
EP:5
fs:4


Roleplay Sample: http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?p=3799953#p3799953

Pretty easy to see this isn't done, post in introduction.

Hossaim wrote: He has a sword of elements called the Assablo Sword of Elements. It can control fire, water, ice, rock, wind, light, darkness, grass.

Hmm, I suppose it can be said you have a weapon that's a key to anyone's weakness. Light for demons, dark for angels, fire for Iceman, water for the Torch, this sword has it all. But what is Grass supposed to do, anyway? Have the ability to control thorned vines to tangle opponents or something?

Nothing wrong with having a strong character, since this sword can technically be taken away from you. It'd be really powerful in the hands of some other characters in this website however. I'd be careful not to 'lose' it if you got that approved.

The EP doesn't match the sword's powers at all.

ill edit

Hello

Your powergrid is off completly to your powers... Id reccomend

Str: 4 above average but not the hulk
Int:3 learned
Speed: 4 superhuman fast
Endurance:3 above average
EP:5
fs: 2 average martial artist

I have problems with the sword, how powerful, to what radius? duration? source needed (IE need water for water control) Explain

I had a question about the sword too. Does it shoot fire or water? Or does it control fire and water thats already existing or around. Like making a Fire Hydrant explode and shoot water out at someone.

Ill explain each one. In an average fight when he isn't furious:
Fire: Blast of Fire, like water coming from afire hydrant that has had its top knocked off
Water: Same as above
Ice: He can freeze anything with in 20 meters, but anyone with a strength of 2 or above should be able to break it.
Stone: This he can only manipulate this. (ie: making minor earthquakes, cracks in the gound)
Darkness: He can manly use to create a ball of darkness of about 5m squared. He can manipulate darkness a bit (ie: making it dark in a space full of light.
Light : same as darkness really.
Grass: He trap people in vines ( Strength with 2 or more should be able to break), manipulate tress to make them get out of his way.

So with Fire/Water/Ice/Stone/Grass, he manipulates existing elements. But with Dark and Light, he creates it?

We really should just make you an admin.

I still believe it's a bit overpowered, so you should cut down a bit. Maybe four-five elements instead of seven?

Ok. ill cut it to:
Fire
Water
Ice
Stone

He can create Fire, Water, Ice. He can manipulate stone.

Looks better. Wait for an admin to approve.

Hossaim wrote:Ill explain each one. In an average fight when he isn't furious:
Fire: Blast of Fire, like water coming from afire hydrant that has had its top knocked off
Water: Same as above
Ice: He can freeze anything with in 20 meters, but anyone with a strength of 2 or above should be able to break it.
Stone: This he can only manipulate this. (ie: making minor earthquakes, cracks in the gound)
Darkness: He can manly use to create a ball of darkness of about 5m squared. He can manipulate darkness a bit (ie: making it dark in a space full of light.
Light : same as darkness really.
Grass: He trap people in vines ( Strength with 2 or more should be able to break), manipulate tress to make them get out of his way.

Copy paste that into your app and youll be good...

You don't think that's a bit much, Toby?

nope