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Post by BladeRunnerX October 2nd 2016, 2:37 am

CHARACTER NAME Detective Rosado
CHARACTER TITLE OR QUOTE
“The only thing necessary for the triumph of evil is for good men to do nothing.” ― Edmund Burke

Basic Biography
Antonio Rosado was brought up in a military manner. Both his parents were Ex-military and as such were no nonsense kinda people. Antonio often rebelled because of his strict upbringing and as a result he was expelled multiple times for fights, skipping class, and drugs. Despite Antonio's flaws he always wanted to be a soldier, as he craved the admiration of the parents he rebelled against. Antonio's sister was an A grade kinda girl. Antonio believed she had a future and so took it upon himself to look out for her, but Francesca had been looking out for herself for some time already. When Antonio began meddling in her life Francesca decided to do something about it. She enslaved her family using a narcotic known as http://www.dailymail.co.uk/news/article-2143584/Scopolamine-Powerful-drug-growing-forests-Colombia-ELIMINATES-free-will.html. Eventually Antonio was able to escape during a house fire, but the resulting fire killed his family and gave him severe burns all over his body.
Real Name: Antonio Rosado
Hero: Detective Antonio
Title: Detective
Alignment: Lawful Good
Age: 26
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Hair: Black
Eyes: Brown
Height: 6'1
Weight: 170
Blood type: A


The Looks: Antonio Rosado wears a black trench coat with the collar up to cover his face. A red tye and black fedora. He may sometimes wear aviators.
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The Legacy
 


Personality: After being betrayed by his family he doesn't trust easily. He is a man of few words. If he believes you are wrong, he is quick to anger. Tedious when it comes to detail. Some would consider him funny. Talking to people comes easily for him.



Powers

Power 1: Skilled Gunman

Power 2: Gadgets

Weakness(es)

Weakness 1: Fear of fire

Weakness 2: PTSD

Items/Minions: Grappling hook, Colt 9 mm, Bulletproof suit, Thermal camera, technological armband.

Physical Priority

Agility 2
Endurance 3
Reaction 1
Strength 4
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Post by Rozmer October 2nd 2016, 10:03 am

Hey there BladeRunner. This character looks like it's got some real potential but we'll need to make some edits first. To start please use our application template found here: https://www.superhero-rpg.com/t5259-character-application-template Copy the green text and use that to reformat your app. Also as a side note on your history please just describe the drug that was used or compress the link into a word. As it is now it just clutters the app.

No on to powers. One or two words is not sufficient to describe them. With the first ability, please provide a detailed description of what it is that it allows him to do. The second ability is almost certainly not an ability but I can't be sure since there is no description for what it does. If you're looking for him to have gadgets, those will need to be individually listed with their own descriptions of what they an do and an associated weakness u set items. Speaking I weaknesses, those too are going to bed to be given a detailed description of how they impede him. You'll also need to change one of them as he cannot have only mental weaknesses.

I hope this has all helped and I look forward to seeing what you come up with. Happy editing Smile
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