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Post by The_soapmaker July 26th 2010, 7:42 pm

Real Name: Acedia Tristitia des Païr-Panlulumondo / Tristan Humpfry
Super etc. Name: Acedion / Acedia
Title: Demon of Despair
Alignment: Neutral, sort of, but not really nice.
Age: A lot of years. The first recorded suicide was in 2000 B.C., so despair and depression have been around for quite a long time.
Gender: It inhibits a male body at the moment.
Race: Demon thingy
Hair: Black, it’s always black. That’s because Acedion dyes it whenever he inhibits a human.
Eyes: At the moment blue.
Height: At the moment 6’7”
Weight: 176 lbs

Costume Description/Image: Well, in a way, his human body is some sort of a costume.

Personality: Acedion is always depressed and suicidal. In its/his eyes, there is no such thing as ‘good’ in the world. Every day it lived, it has tried to kill itself, but since it’s Self-Death incarnate, it is unable to do so, which resolved in even greater depression. Life is a burden to it and being virtually immortal doesn’t really make him feel any better. Since it is always depressed it never laughs and seldomly interacts with other people (which makes him also apathic). In fact, when somebody is in need of help, or thinking about suicide, Acedion will always try to “end that person’s suffering” by either remain idle or talk one into suicide. In other words: he’s worse than apathic; he wants you to suffer and die. However, he will never try to intentionally kill somebody, partially because it’s too much effort, partially because it does not give him satisfaction (well…sort of); only self-murders do.
Besides the whole stereo-type emo-thingy, Acedion is also a complete psycho. Very often, he walks the streets talking to himself. He has frequent yet random mental episodes in which he falls out on complete strangers and rants on and on about unearthly and philosophical matters, most notably the meaning of life and the reasons of existance (which there isn’t in his eyes).

History: The Spirit of Despair has been around for some while; over 4000 years. The Spirit itself has not a very interesting personality, it just seeks hosts to survive and feed off other peoples misery. It can remember stuff, though, but it need a human mind to fully utilise its own thinking potential.
Anyway, Acedion originally comes from Africa. It has always been around, but in 4000 B.C. a suicidal wizard banished out his dark thoughts by means of dark magic. This caused a dark and dangerous entity to emerge from the depts of the wizard’s mind, which lived on to feed of other people’s misery and despair.
Since 6000 years is quite a long time, I won’t write down Acedion’s entire history, but just a few highlights:
- Acedia / Acedion got it’s name in Ancient Greece.
- It caused the suicides of a lot of very important people, such as Cleopatra.
- It has been confused with banshees in the past.
- It has creeped out a lot of people in his true form, which contributed to the forming of a lot of myths.
The body it currently possesses used to be a depressed goth guy called Tristan Humpfry who encountered Acedion on his first suicide attempt (he was 17 at the time and should be 29 by now). He got possessed and now he serves as Acedion’s material vessel.

Powers:
- Immune to suicide: Acedion cannot kill himself in any way, for he is Suicide incarnated. And, because of his suicidal nature, he will always think of an attack as a chance to get killed. Which wouldn’t work since it would count as suicide (or rather euthanasia). It kinda works like really fast regeneration.
- Seed of Despair: Acedion is able to inspire or enhance grim, depressed or suicidal thoughts within a range of 500 yards.
- Sin telepathy: since everybody has it, he has it too. Acedion can communicate over long range with the other Sins, and creatures of his own kind of sin.
- Possession: Acedion is able to possess the body of another weak-willed human after the death of his current host. He can only possess depressed or suicidal people and he can only travel 72 yards outside his host. Thankfully for his own sake, he can’t be killed easily.
- Claw of Darkness: Acedion is able to temporarily put the talons of his true form on the outside of his host’s body. In other, more practical words: he can transform his hand into a black claw. The claw can cut through pretty tough material, such as steel. Steel is actually the limit. It’s a mean claw, though.


PowerGrid:
Int. 3
Str. 4
Dur. 6
Spd. 3
EP. 5
FS. 1

Character Image/Description:
Acedion des Païr: 'Sloth' Dream-from-sandman
The Sandman deserves better than this.


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Post by Chellizard July 26th 2010, 10:53 pm

Amazing! I looove him.. err, it! <3 Haha.

Sloth is great like this. :]

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Post by Slamfist July 27th 2010, 3:15 pm

You need higher EP for the amount of powers you have, really fast regen alone I believe is 3 or 4. You probably need a good 5-6 points in EP for this guy.
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Post by Guest July 27th 2010, 3:49 pm

Shocked

Soap made an app that needs improvement? DEAR GOD!
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Post by The_soapmaker July 27th 2010, 4:42 pm

Don't worry too much, Night. I was 'intoxicated' when I made the power grid.

Is the grid better this way?
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Post by Guest July 27th 2010, 6:02 pm

Thank goodness, I thought reality was breaking.
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Post by The_soapmaker July 27th 2010, 7:34 pm

Heh. That's fun to 'hear'.
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Post by The_soapmaker July 27th 2010, 7:47 pm

unrealistic.entity wrote:Amazing! I looove him.. err, it! <3 Haha.

Sloth is great like this. :]

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Haha, I'm glad you like it. It was pretty difficult to come up with a personality for Dion. And make it fit with his powers. But I thought like this; there's only one thing sadder than wanting to kill yourself, and that is wanting it and not being able to do so. At least, I think it's sadder, I don't know about you.
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Post by Chellizard August 6th 2010, 3:47 pm

The_soapmaker wrote:
unrealistic.entity wrote:Amazing! I looove him.. err, it! <3 Haha.

Sloth is great like this. :]

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Haha, I'm glad you like it. It was pretty difficult to come up with a personality for Dion. And make it fit with his powers. But I thought like this; there's only one thing sadder than wanting to kill yourself, and that is wanting it and not being able to do so. At least, I think it's sadder, I don't know about you.

I think it's sadder, indeed. Hehehe. ^^;

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Post by Da Boss August 11th 2010, 12:36 pm

Damnit Soap, you see what you did!? You made an app that needs improvement and now my grandfather's back from the dead, so thank you -_- he smells... I mean, even worse than before, now he's all dead and stuff and its unbearable...

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Post by Bash September 6th 2010, 11:39 pm

Id hate to say it but you'd need to listen to the boss is right. I don't like:
- Seed of Despair: Acedion is able to inspire or enhance grim, depressed or suicidal thoughts within a range of 500 yards.
This violates a control other PC god modding rule. Now if it was NPC its fine but otherwise no. I would allow the ATTEMPT to seed despair, but nothing more.

I am seeing this problem a lot. I know it's an archetype of the 7 deadly sins, but that's no reason to break rules already in place. however the reason.

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It's getting hard to breathe.
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Post by Da Boss September 7th 2010, 8:22 pm

Because the power doesn't directly control a PC it isnt considered against the rules, controlling powers are OP because you could control someone to kill themselves, his power doesn't necessarily do that because its still up to the PC how he deals with its effects, its more of an RP element, like Jackies rage ability

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Post by Bash September 7th 2010, 8:25 pm

thats what i said

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Post by The_soapmaker October 9th 2010, 4:35 pm

Fuck this char. It never got approved and I don't really care. I'm gonna work on a better new char now. One that will not really rock your socks off, but probably make you go: "Yeah, this is rad."

Ignore this app.
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Post by Bash October 9th 2010, 5:03 pm

Very well, Can I use it in the assault as a boss character?

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