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Post by Van Helcraft April 4th 2011, 1:35 pm

Real Name:Trinity Flame
Super Hero/Villain/Renegade/etc Name:Sun-Spot
Title: go ahead call me something i dare you.
Alignment:villian
Age:23(predators stop aging at 17 so looks 17)
Gender:female
Race:predator
Hair:red
Eyes:red
Height:5,3
Weight:123

Costume Description/Image: Casual blue jean shorts and white tank top with a red bandanna tied around her neck occasionally wears a school girl unifom with her bandanna tied around her arm.

Personality:hates being in the limelight and keeps everyone but Sub-Zero and Schneider away from her.Thinks everything out before acting in anyway and tends to fuss over details to an extreme.She shows no mercy to anyone would kill a baby just for crying.

History:Not much to tell she was born in a test tube as a part of P3.(a program Schneider created in an effort to genetically alter a clone of him with increased strength to fix his weakness.) She was five years old when she met the seven year old Sub-Zero. They argued occasionaly but fought mostly with predator 1. Now that they are older he two are lovers and almost never apart.They hunt for the Predators that had escaped years previously.Learning several new languages to question people that live in foreigon countries about the escaped predators.While travelling in japan she witnessed a sword fight she was struck by the grace of the fight and so took lessons herself. She mastered the katana in under a month and asked Schneider to make her one. She then began using the sword for the medium of her powers.

Powers: can control the flame to increase its size and force it to move in the desired direction. She is also incredibly skilled with the Katana she carries around and uses it for a medium to control her flames.(its not channeling she just swings the sword to shoot the fire she thinks it looks more dramatic.)the katana is made from a super durable metal folded over several times. She has studied excessively and can speak several languages.

Power Grid:
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Character Image/Description: If description please be very detailed on it. http://mulinks.net/series/Shakugan%20no%20Shana%20II.jpg



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Post by Dr Cosmos April 4th 2011, 2:13 pm

Good character, but I'd still like more for the history and things. Generally, a full paragraph is enough to satisfy me.

The powers are a little iffy with me, I don't think I like that she can create fire anywhere around her with a thought. It'd be much more better to say that she can control and expand flames that are already on fire, by making them bigger and using them offensively. Oh, and if you want to do damage with the Katana, the item has to be made by her in a unique process, so it can do damage.

Just one last thing, what do you mean by the blade channels her fire powers? Can you explain it a bit more?

EDIT:

Okay, I think you've done enough. Approving. A power grid will be added later.

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Post by Pain April 13th 2011, 4:29 am

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