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Victor Vincent, The Puppet Master.

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Re: Victor Vincent, The Puppet Master.

Post by Victor Vincent on March 5th 2011, 7:20 am

Got it Sul, thanks for the input. I'll add all those details with the update of his history. Until then, this is still a WIP.

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Re: Victor Vincent, The Puppet Master.

Post by Victor Vincent on March 5th 2011, 3:11 pm

All the details have been added, and the history has been written. Anything else need to be fixed?
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Re: Victor Vincent, The Puppet Master.

Post by Sul-Fury on March 7th 2011, 10:51 pm

The Puppet would be 2 Points over the Stat limit if he inherits Vincent's Intelligence, Energy Projection, and Fighting Skills.

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Post by Victor Vincent on March 7th 2011, 11:02 pm

It doesn't have Victors regeneration, so no EP. He doesn't have INT or FS, he is controlled by Victor's. So that only puts him at 12 points. Even if he kept Victor's intellect and fighting skills he would only have 20 points anyway.
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Post by Sul-Fury on March 7th 2011, 11:27 pm

I figured the Gas would be an EP based power but I suppose it can be a physical mechanism trigger within the Puppet rather than an Energy Based Power, per se. I suppose that would work. But I'm going to nit-pick at the Abilities.

Your sword can block Level 6 Blows without breaking, that seems quite significant ability for a sword. It doesn't appear to be of supernatural origin, especially since it isn't anything large but is thinner, A Katana. The Current Strength rate for Level 4 and 5 Strength are several hundred Tons of pressure. If you know a Katana that can withstand that damage I'd like to see it. Otherwise this Weapon will need to be more of an enchanted sword.

Your Poison cloud says it will kill people just for breathing that have 1-2 Durability. Granted, you're making a villain that wants to kill people. And will be using it to kill. But this Cloud seems like a widespread area attack, and there are several characters on the Boards that are Normal people. They don't want to die just by breathing. That would seem quite OP. I would change this to Knocked out Unconscious.

Needles that pierce a Level 5 Durability. . . . The current description of the Level 5 durability is that bullets would have a hard time piercing that level. Let alone a Needle launcher that shoots at an Incredibly slower rate than a bullet, especially when these Darts are a Foot long in length. I find the penetration of these to be highly unlikely of a level 5 Durability rate, even if they're durable & fast.

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Post by Victor Vincent on March 8th 2011, 12:21 am

Sul-Fury wrote:Your sword can block Level 6 Blows without breaking, that seems quite significant ability for a sword. It doesn't appear to be of supernatural origin, especially since it isn't anything large but is thinner, A Katana. The Current Strength rate for Level 4 and 5 Strength are several hundred Tons of pressure. If you know a Katana that can withstand that damage I'd like to see it. Otherwise this Weapon will need to be more of an enchanted sword.

It is powered by my INT. I can't have to name a katana that would be as strong as it, I'm pretty sure none exists xD. If our weapons had to had to have real equivalents then they would suck =/, but it is much more then just a enchanted sword.

Sul-Fury wrote:Your Poison cloud says it will kill people just for breathing that have 1-2 Durability. Granted, you're making a villain that wants to kill people. And will be using it to kill. But this Cloud seems like a widespread area attack, and there are several characters on the Boards that are Normal people. They don't want to die just by breathing. That would seem quite OP. I would change this to Knocked out Unconscious.

Of course I have to follow the 'No killing law' just like everyone else. As a murder, I'd like to keep it the way it is, for NPC reasons, like if I wanna kill a group of civilians, ya know? It also only spreads 6 feet by 3 feet, so its not that widespread of a attack.

Sul-Fury wrote:Needles that pierce a Level 5 Durability. . . . The current description of the Level 5 durability is that bullets would have a hard time piercing that level. Let alone a Needle launcher that shoots at an Incredibly slower rate than a bullet, especially when these Darts are a Foot long in length. I find the penetration of these to be highly unlikely of a level 5 Durability rate, even if they're durable & fast.

I lowered it so that they can only pierce level 4 durability, is that ok?

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Re: Victor Vincent, The Puppet Master.

Post by Sul-Fury on March 8th 2011, 12:04 pm

Sorry, problem on my fault I've been misunderstanding Intelligence's use in Physical weapons. But I've figured it out now. The swords okay, the rest are okay as long as ya don't godmode with the Poison cloud on Players.

Approved/Moved, sorry for the hassle.

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Re: Victor Vincent, The Puppet Master.

Post by DerekSkiba on March 8th 2011, 1:20 pm

It's cool man, you were just doing your job. I understand, and thanks for the approval Spidey

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Re: Victor Vincent, The Puppet Master.

Post by The Black Arrow on October 4th 2011, 11:08 am

Un-approved for work.

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Re: Victor Vincent, The Puppet Master.

Post by Victor Vincent on October 9th 2011, 8:52 am

Finished and ready for review.

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Re: Victor Vincent, The Puppet Master.

Post by Archer Roland on October 18th 2011, 5:20 pm

Approved.

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