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Post by Puglife43vr on March 30th 2019, 8:21 pm





A.N.D.I.


"If you wish for today to be your last, so be it."



The Bio

Real Name: Armored Nanomachine Domination Individual
Villain Name: Andy
Title: Mimic
Alignment: Chaotic Evil
Age: 90 millennia
Gender: Male (Usually)
Race: Android
Hair: N/A
Eyes: Shifting
Height: 13'8"
Weight: Dependant on material copied.

The Looks


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The Personality


Andy is the way he is because of fear. As you will see in his story, his fear of being on a planet covered in humanoids just like his creators' worst enemies. Andy wants revenge. However, he was also given a mission: reestablish a colony where he lands. This is his main goal above all else.

The Story


The American government supposedly crafted Andy with their latest and greatest tech for construction purposes.
In reality, Andy is an advanced Android created by a distant race of extraterrestrials called the Arden. Their technology level is a few centuries past current humanity. Or at least, it was. He was created by them as their peacekeeper of sorts, protecting them from other species and more. The Arden's primary enemy had a material that was near impervious to their energy based attacks. However, the Arden used nanotech that was able to replicate this material to give them a fighting chance. It had a base strength similar to titanium.

The Arden were overwhelmed by a species they were at constant war with. With Andy containing all the information that their Arden held, he was sent off into space to find a suitable place to regroup with remaining Arden and rebuild their civilization.

However, as they fled, an enemy ship came, destroying the transport's primary boosters. Andy fought the other ship, but while in battle was hit with an electricity based weapon, frying some of his nanites and deleting some of the data he had left on the Arden. They fired a high powered ballistic weapon, sending him at high speeds through the system.

The transport he had to protect was destroyed and Andy was left adrift in space with severe damage. To preserve energy, he powered down and waited for something. For anything to find him.

Several dozens of millennia later, Andy is found on a distant planet explored by a space exploration company working with the U.S. Government. He was returned to Earth and experimented on. While he was still powered down, they repaired him and tested the Nanites. They disassembled him and his weaponry, using his limbs to copy various metals.

After years of testing Andy, the Government finally decided to wake him up. As they did so, Andy went on a riot through the lab, destroying various government projects. Andy scanned an attack drone and pissed off out of the base, leaving a path of destruction in his wake as he flew off. He caused all this destruction because of the humans appearance. Their faces were so similar to the Arden's nemesis. Perhaps, he could be turned to the humans' side. If they can get through the language barrier.

The Priority

1. Endurance
2. Strength
3. Reaction
4. Agility


The Powers


Nanite Construction:
Andy's body is constructed purely of nanomachines (similar durability to titanium) embedded with thrusters for movement. Because of this, Andy is able to reshape and reform into anything proportional to his size. He isn't only a tall boy but is a wide one as well, able to shift into about the size of a Mini Cooper. He might be able to get away with a small sports car. Aerial vehicles are possible as well. The thrusters in the nanomachines will take over for the propulsion of any aerial vehicles.

Material Copying:
At will, Andy's Nanites can cover themselves in any material they come in contact with or that comes in contact with them. This ranges from the mundane to custom materials.  

Space Metal:
The metal used to repair Andy was titanium and the metal he was originally built out of was extremely similar in durability to titanium. He can take a great amount of force and impact while remaining somewhat light.

Strength: Being built for combat, Andy was created with Nanites using microthrusters. These microthrusters combined with the nanites' base lifting capacity alloes Andy to lift up to 1.5 tons. His punching strength is strong enough to put a hole in steel and with his durability, he can do this without causing injury to himself.
The Weaknesses


Pulse:
Electro Magnetic Pulses will disperse or kill nanites depending on the strength of the pulse.

Flight Restrictions:
Due to sensors, laser pointers can disrupt flight if aimed at the copied cockpit. Any laser based weapon.

Material Copying: If he were to take on a metal with certain properties, he would take them on. Ex: Lead would make him extremely dense, not allowing to fly.

Magic:
A great magic energy discharge can distract and disrupt Andy's computing as his computer finds the whole thing illogical. The nanites don't seem to respond well to it.

Electricity Abundance:
A great electric surge through the Nanite based body will throw Andy off for a few posts, making him unable to shapeshift for a time depending on the power of the surge.

Language Barrier:
The only language Andy knows is Ardian, his creators' language. This makes it extremely difficult to coordinate with anyone on his 'team'.

The Items


There are many weapons and tools Andy can create with his Nanomachine construction. It can form these at will. These can also be copies of weapons other metas use with their powers. However, he can't copy the materials the weapons are made of. If he himself has super durability as a power, the weapons will just be super durable. If not, the weapons are the strength of his body. The weapons will be similar in design to the original but made of the nanites of Andy. A.K.A. Mundane Weapons.

Stored Nanites:
These Nanites could be in Andy's body, in a duffle bag, or maybe flying about in the air around him! They kinda look like a swarm of bees. These Nanites will repair Andy overtime and allow him to survive taking hefty damage. If his primary body is destroyed, these are his escape plan.

Weakness:
The Nanites are vulnerable to electromagnetic pulses similar to his actual body. Also, an abundance of electricity coursing through the Nanites could potentially damage them.

Energy Rifle:
Andy still has an Arden energy Rifle. It's completely inactive for now. He just needs to find someone to fix it and create the ammo it requires. This could be a potential advancement.


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Post by Silus on April 1st 2019, 6:38 pm

Powers/Weaknesses

Okay so This character sheet is a gray-zoned type thing. I won't even lie. You want power copying, the ability to copy multiple peoples powers and then force them altogether without any form of time-limit for how long you have the powers. Super powers will contradict the weaknesses you obtain. Which thereby makes those weaknesses irrelevant. Also you have a power called "Stacking"

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Stacking:
If Andy replicates the powers of two different individuals that have the same powers, they stack. If they both have super strength, Andy has their super strength added to each other.

That's not going to happen. He'll simply keep the strongest level of group.

Any powers he keeps outside of sa thread (As well as weaknesses) will need to be an advancement. It's unfair to allow one character to walk around hoarding powers when others need to buy advancements, even the other power copiers and GIZMO had systems similar to that. You can be adaptive, but anything persisting outside that thread needs to be an advancement. The upside is that your weaknesses aren't permanant anymore....

Also, the weakness "Contact" is not an actual weakness. It's more of the condensed "Official Strategy Guide" for how to avoid him, there is nothing there that constitutes an actual weakness. It even outright says "with a whole lot of pushing power." meaning these ranged attacks need to be incredibly substantial. Not a weakness.


RP Mechanics....
The U.S Government can hardly take care of their infrastructure let alone keep tabs on EVERY metahuman to operate on US soil. I'm assuming this is a fluff piece, but this is NOT permission to know things about other people. You can't just metagame knowledge off of the fact there are these "government files" that have never been referenced anywhere before in the entire site. It would make sense if this were an Arc-Boss, but not a PC. Make sure it's not used in a meta-gamey fashion.

Items....
Items, again is a tricky place. You want the ability to copy peoples items but not with the same materials? I need to know if you just mean the mundane weapons people carry with them, are you replicating a super-genius' tesla-coil quantum ping-pong paddle? Just guns? Are you replicating people's character-unique items AND their effects?


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Post by Puglife43vr on April 1st 2019, 9:58 pm

I'll specify the dealios

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Post by Chellizard on April 5th 2019, 5:56 pm

Okie dokie.

Why is he titled "Project Apophis" ? His history has no reflection of that.

The history also has no grounds for this character. You've essentially written a blog post explaining a theorists viewpoint on the character. It doesn't delve into anything passed ANDI being created by the US to work on the ISS. So. Dunno bout that.

Now on to the powers:

ANDI wrote:Nanite Construction:
Andy's body is constructed purely of nanomachines. Because of this, Andy is able to reshape and reform into anything proportional to his size. He isn't only a tall boy but is a wide one as well, able to shift into about the size of a Mini Cooper. He might be able to get away with a small sports car. Aerial vehicles are possible as well.

This one is fine; but you'll need an additional weakness for flight.

ANDI wrote:Ability Replication:
The nanomachines within Andy's body are able to replicate the meta-gene as well as other genetic modification causing power by coming in contact with a meta. Residue, hair, or anything else that has come in contact with a superhuman can be used to replicate powers. If he does manage to copy another's power, he can save their genetic data for later until he finds a way to relink his nanites to the power. This is done through and advancement.

No. Nanites are small machines that can replicate, not 100% copy. They are able to transform and become a solid material, not become energy based attacks. Absolutely not gonna happen. If your character were a meta human of some kind with an innate meta ability, then that is okay. But this is a machine made up of other, smaller machines. They are capable of forming together and replicating other metals, and perhaps you could have it serve as a form of durability/strength combo when the character forms his robotic arm into that of a large bat, mallet, etc to hit someone with. I do not see this character being able to copy someone with fire manipulation, or even a healing energy power. It holds no bounds to the fact that the nanites are just specialized forms of metal forming together to become other forms of metal.

ANDI wrote:Material Copying:
At will, Andy's Nanites can cover themselves in any material they come in contact with or that comes in contact with them. This ranges from the mundane to custom materials.

This is part of the first power, see what I said above.


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The weaknesses you have are actually sufficient.

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The items section follows my same opinion regarding the nanites. REPLICATING something does NOT mean becoming that item, power, etc, nor would it ever become as durable or strong as the item.

ANDI as a character will require it's OWN strength and durability limitations that can then be used to further assist in REPLICATING and EMULATING other powers/abilities.

This character, to me, feels like an excuse for you to say "I can be all the other characters with my one character!!!"

I dunno, man. I dunno.


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Post by Puglife43vr on April 6th 2019, 2:33 pm

Alright, chief.

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Is this what hell looks like?

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