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Post by TheSummoner January 25th 2017, 1:52 pm





The Summoner


"No great inner event befalls those who summon it not"



The Bio

Real Name: Karn Grasool
Renegade Name: The Summoner
Title: The Hammer of the Gods, Creator of the end times
Age: 500 Years old
Gender: Male
Race: Karzew
Hair: None
Eyes: Gold
Height: 7'4"
Weight: 800 Lbs.
Blood type: Lava

The Looks

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The Personality
Jovial, fun loving, adventurous and always early. Karn is a simple beast who just wants to create and have a good time, to the point that he will ignore that which would bother most in the name of art and fun. He knows his large size and looks can be intimidating so he tries to talk slow and calmly to those around him assuring he is of no threat. A troubling past though makes him not trust those around him to a great length. His consumption of metal for food has forced him to be a bit more of a outcast on Earth, as most people don't enjoy their cars being eaten.

The Story
Karn was born on a planet far beyond the reach of what man kinds knows to be the edge of the universe, here massive entities rule the lands and wage battle in a endless futile war. These wars require weapons though and that is what brought Karn to life, a powerful  general made Karn from his own life force to be the blacksmith for his whole nation. This simple life of work and mastering his art was more then enough for the blacksmith until the day he met Khalid, a female engineer who could not be any more perfect. After what felt like a eternity of chasing her Karn discovered a dark secret that she was actually a spy for another nation. Confronting her turned violent as she attempted to attack Karn but greatly underestimated his strength, accidently crushing her skull Karn became a fugitive due to his lack of evidence. Running from his home in a large cargo ship he  landed on a planet deep on the outer fringe known as Earth.

The Priority

1. Strength
2. Endurance
3. Agility
4. Reaction


The Powers

1. Karn has the strength of the gods flowing thru him as he was one of their earliest creations, he's capable of lifting 10 tons.
2. His skin is made of stony protrusions that are impervious to extreme heat and strong enough to brush off blasts from a tank.
3. Creations made by Karns hammer are capable of being brought to life by him to do his bidding.
4. A powerful stream of lava can be projected from Karns mouth.


The Weaknesses

1. Karn is unable to swim.
2. Extreme heights debilitate him, making him unable to focus and causing nausea....flaming nausea.
3. Extreme cold slows him immensely.
4. Karn must eat hourly or he goes into a state of delirium where he is uncontrollable and known to attack randomly.

The Items

The Lifebringer - A powerful war hammer crafted in the fires of existence that can smash through most metals but also grants life to the items Karn builds with it.

The Fluff


The RP Sample
It was a cold rainy New England day as Karn sat in his ship staring at the strange phenomena occuring around him, never before had he seen water fall from the sky, this truly was a strange planet. With little working knowledge of his new home Karn decided playing lowkey was a smart approach for now, his ship hidden in a long forgotten junk yard. Just another rusted hull amongst the rotten cars of the past. The large excess of metals and isolation would be perfect for the newcomer. He lounged carelessly in his pilot chair observing a car mirror with curiosity, the technology here was so slim and slick compared to the massive bulky gadgets of his home world. With a sly smile and a deep laugh he leaned back and realized just how deep of trouble he got himself in.









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Post by TheSummoner January 31st 2017, 11:26 am

Finished and ready for consideration.
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Post by Thorgron January 31st 2017, 4:32 pm

Alright, first off I really like this character. We only seem to get a handful of aliens around here so it's always interesting to see what people do with them. That said we've got a few tweaks that and adjustments that need to be made to get this guy all ready for approval.

The first thing that needs corrected are your descriptions of his powers. There's nothing wrong with what you currently have written, but there needs to be more. The more description you put into how your character's abilities work, what their limits are and so on, the easier it is for us mods to determine whether or not their acceptable and what needs to be done to get them there. Currently we know that he's strong, but not how strong, durable, but not how durable, etc. Basically just give us some more description as to what exactly he can do with each ability.

The situation is similar with his weaknesses, a total inability to swim and being slowed immensely by cold are both fine. But we need to know more about the other two. What happens if he's up high? Is it a physical or mental thing? And what about eating, so he needs to eat constantly. What happens if he doesn't? How soon can he start to see negative side effects?

And finally is the hammer. It's perfectly fine if it's got piercing properties but being able to literally break through anything isn't going to fly. We have no impenetrable defenses and no inatippable weapons here in order to keep things fair. Like I said you can still keep it that the hammer easily bypasses most defenses, just not all of them.

Make those changes and we should have a better idea of what we're working with and you'll be well on your way to being approved. I look forward to seeing this guy finished and RPing with him. Happy editing! Smile

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Post by TheSummoner February 6th 2017, 3:42 pm

Alright, updated and ready
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